I doubt you will find an agent or a publisher who will take this on. There are so many books on writing and yours is nothing exceptional. I suggest you write fiction, as you seem to be a prolific writer. Go to softeampact.com, they need people like you there, of course its voluntary, but you will... view book

To be honest, this sort of writing does not appeal to me. Don't get me wrong, this doesn't mean your book is crap. I found the start confusing,I had to slow down and re-read to fathom out what the author was attempting to impart to me. The break in the telephone conversation (badly grammar... view book

I liked the story, even though it slowed down in places. I would like to know at the start in which country the story takes place or better still the nationality of the characters. The grammar is sometimes American and sometimes English, very confusing when one tries to identify with the charact... view book

You have a problem with your tenses. I found your sub-chapters long-winded, they slowed the pace of the book, full of one info dump after another. You also have a problem with your pronouns and what happened to the box? You have a lot of serious editing before you if you wish to find an age... view book

I enjoyed reading your story, my aunt suggested I take a look. You write at a fast pace, something I appreciate. Your grammar is done well, punctuation is also good, I'm wondering which is the best market for this book. POV in writing is most important and you do it well by using deep POV with e... view book