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My first three novels: "Under the Same Sky"and"Sound of the Heart"and"Somewhere to Dream"have all been published by Berkley/Penguin US Penguin asked me to remove my books from this site - you'll just have to buy the real things! :)***I'd love to EDIT YOUR BOOK, if you're ready. I invite you to email me a few pages, and I'll send you my FREE suggestions on one of those pages (email@example.com). Please come visit my editing site: www.WritingWildly.com for more information.A few of the books I've edited on here:"The Qualities of Wood"http://www.authonomy.com/books/19305/the-qualities-of-wood/read-book/#chapter(now published by Harper Collins)"Summer Rose" & "Sacred Ponies"http://www.authonomy.com/writing-community/profile/f06e6937-64c2-45c2-9d94-e3d0a995e2bf/k-c-hart/"Willow Pond" http://www.amazon.com/Willow-Pond-ebook/dp/B006NQHE36/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1339970801&sr=8-1&keywords=willow+pond"The Reluctant Warrior"http://www.authonomy.com/books/18992/the-reluctant-warrior-the-beginning/read-book/#chapter
"Outlander" series by DIANA GABALDON"Into the Wilderness" series by SARA DONATI "Pieces of Sky" by KAKI WARNERAnything by PENELOPE WILLIAMSON"Come, Thou Tortoise" by JESSICA GRANT
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Thank you very much, Genevieve. :)
Thank you Genevieve. 'Stone Circle' is full of POV switches all the w....
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Hi Genevieve, Thanks so much for your backing. I really appreciate i....
Do you plan on adding narration to the story? Dialog is great, but naked without narration (unless it's a play, and even then there are descriptions of movements, expressions, settings).
very enjoyable read. The language is terrific, the story engaging, the pacing lovely. One tiny editorial suggestion: "and then" is unnecessary and slows the flow of the words. Simply do a search and remove one or the other. Shelved.
love this. Love the concept, love the voice, love the flow of your words. Congrats. Tiny editorial suggestion: get rid of the 2nd & 3rd sentences of the introductory paragraph. They're unnecessary and slow the pace. full stars and shelved.
love this. Giving it a full stars. My only editorial comment would be a suggestion that you take a look at the first word of every paragraph - almost every paragraph begins with "We." Variety is the spice of life, and with your obvious talent, I'd suggest digging into that, mixing things up again. B...
Please tell me you're writing a series! This is terrific!