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I write with greetings and invitation to read a chapter or more of my....
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Overall, I thought it was quite good. You have great characters, a sympathetic protagonist, and an interesting premise. If you are serious about publishing and franchising it, I would change the protagonist's disfigurement so that it does not sound so grotesque. I think it would be too scary for yo...