Normally, Tim, I'm Incredibly averse to any sort of Judeo Crristian Theology. Im just completely over it. You sir, have in fused something interesting to the whole played out theme. I'm intrigued after reading this first chapter. The premise has the flavour of Taoist or some Buddhist versions of Hell. King Yama, torturing you for your sins, until your payment is complete, and then reassigning you to your next fate; reincarnation, the imperial beuracracy, etc. Im really intrigued Tim. I'll keep reading.