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Marisa Elyse

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Currently writing the sequel to Tower of Paradise, the City of Eden.

I am a life long Californian who wears flip flops in the winter.

In between being a full time college student and nursing classes I manage to find the time to devote to my true love, which is writing. I am often inspired by other books, video games, and jigsaw puzzles. Yes, jigsaw puzzles.

I used to be a Ghostwriter for different people and websites, and from that I grew to love writing. So the next step is getting (hopefully) published.

Any comments and constructive criticism are greatly appreciated, and I tend to return the favor.

Agents/Publishers who are interested can contact me at mekarpin@gmail.com.

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Hi Marisa, A while back, you gave Deshay of the Woods a read and h....

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I wrote 750 days ago

I usually look at the tags of a story before proceeding, as they tell me what I can expect from a story. I saw 'goats', laughed a little, and jumped on into the story. The opening was good, just way too many hyphens for me to digest. I suggest scaling down on them a little, as some can be replaced w... view book

I wrote 768 days ago

So this is what most YA is about these days, and I think you have a great story developing. A few things I want to comment on: Is this the first book? Because it reads like it is a second book in the series, which isn't bad, but it feels like there is a chunk I'm missing out on despite the first... view book

I wrote 777 days ago

So a reading swap review~ This work is considered YA, though I believe it holds a higher rating than that with the explicit description of sexual doings. Sure, kids that age have sex, but this reads like an adult novel with teenagers in it. Other than that, I found your story interesting with the... view book

I wrote 777 days ago

So a reading swap review~ This work is considered YA, though I believe it holds a higher rating than that with the explicit description of sexual doings. Sure, kids that age have sex, but this reads like an adult novel with teenagers in it. Other than that, I found your story interesting with the... view book

I wrote 778 days ago

The overall atmosphere is very good, and gives way to a great start. One critique would be to not overwrite things, as it becomes a huge paragraph of little words that I am tempted to skip over. The same can be said for your long pitch, and I suggest that you break it up into two paragraphs at least... view book

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