When I first dived into this I sort skimmed along the first few paragraphs, but there was something there that pulled me in and made me read word for word. Let me just say that I enjoyed the male characters more than anyone else, even though your MC was brillant. There was something so mystifying re... view book

I usually look at the tags of a story before proceeding, as they tell me what I can expect from a story. I saw 'goats', laughed a little, and jumped on into the story. The opening was good, just way too many hyphens for me to digest. I suggest scaling down on them a little, as some can be replaced w... view book

Who doesn't love a new twist on Alice in Wonderland? It seems like a daunting task, but you really have captured Wonderland and twisted it to your own fancy, creating something that is just as quirky and interesting as the original. The one thing I feel the need to comment on is the pace of the stor... view book

So this is what most YA is about these days, and I think you have a great story developing. A few things I want to comment on: Is this the first book? Because it reads like it is a second book in the series, which isn't bad, but it feels like there is a chunk I'm missing out on despite the first... view book

So a reading swap review~ This work is considered YA, though I believe it holds a higher rating than that with the explicit description of sexual doings. Sure, kids that age have sex, but this reads like an adult novel with teenagers in it. Other than that, I found your story interesting with the... view book