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written 563 days ago
cherry

CHIRG

I think you have a powerfull and original story. I loved the characters and the settings.
Im not sure if I have anything else to add to all the comments you have already received.
I have read only four and a half chapters but just because I don't really have the time to read more and had to stop because of other commitments, but I truly enjoyed your story and your writing.
Thanks for sharing it and I have added it to my watching list as I want to carry on reading it as soon as I have some spare time.
PS. I am giving it 6 stars for what I have read so far.
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written 684 days ago
cherry

Hi Lenny,

I've read a few chapters of your book, had my own thoughts about it and then read some of the previous comments. I think you should consider the comments David Farrington wrote to you, as it basically says it all.
I enjoyed reading your story and I truly believe it can make into a great book, but it needs some editing and apart from some wrong punctuation I felt a bit lost as I am not sure who your target reader is.
I need to add that the first chapter explaining in which chapters things happen didn't work for me, as I prefer to read through and find out things as I carry on reading. I think the unespected is what makes a good book and I believe the characters should be good enough to be recognized throughout the book and their description should follow as things happen.
Saying all of that, I am not the editor and that only reflects my opinion. I see potention in your story, but I believe it needs to be developed further. I know I am not the best person to judge as I can only write short stories for children as I lack good English and grammar, but I base my opinion in what I have learned on this website and as a reader.
I didn't get to the last chapter as it didn't hold my attention to that far, but I think if you do some editing and have in mind a clear picture of who your audience will be, than readers will read more of it and consenquently will want to support the book and add it to their shelf.
Im rating it with 6 stars as I think it has a very interesting plot and it can be and it is worth to improve.

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written 691 days ago
cherry

My second comment on your book:

I have read all the five chapters now. Could you please upload more??? I can not have enough of it.
This has to be one of the best ever books I have read on authonomy.
My English is not good enough to describe how much I loved reading your story. Everything falls in place. The pace is wonderful, the story is extremelly funny, well written, the plot is great and I can not wait to read more of this book.
I will do what I have never done on authonomy. I will spread to my friends on my list about your book as i really believe it needs all the support to get to the top and stay their for the whole month.
Thank you so much for sharing this story and I hope you will upload more of it and if you do, please,let me know as I really would love to read the whole book.

Thanks
Eddie
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written 691 days ago
cherry

Little black book suggested me to read Miss Manners and I started a few days ago, but life got too busy and I was forced to stop.
I re-started reading the book today, added to my watching list, rated with 6 stars and added to my bookshelf and just because I am loving reading your book. I am on chapter 3 and just stopped because I need to go to bed.
I like the pace of your writing, find it extremely funny, well tempered and I think it has all the elements necessary to receive a great review by the editors and hopefully to their taste to be published.
I don't have any criticism to what I have read so far, and I will read all the chapter you upload and I hope you can upload more chapters if the 5 chapters you have here are not the whole book.
The only 'bad' if it is, comment I would like to make is that I didn't feel Bill angry enough when he came to separate her during the fight. I thought it should be stronger, but that is just my opinion.
Apart from that I would like to congratulate on your talent. You are definitely a somebody and your mother should and will be very proud of you when your book are reviewed as I can only forecast a great review.

Eddie
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written 697 days ago
cherry

Girg review:

Amazing and well written story.I have read only chapter one and found it emotional and strong, to catch and hold any reader to the next chapter. As far as I can see from the opening chapter your book has all the necessary elements to be a great success amongst children.
I wish you all the success with your book and when it approaches the editor's desk you can count on my support. It is a real pleasure to give it a rate of 6 stars.
Thanks for sharing.
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written 704 days ago
cherry

CHIRG review,

Great funny book. I love your writing style. I am enjoying every chapter.
Im backing and rating with 6 stars. Im sure this book will do great and deserves to be published with no doubt.
I am on chapter 3 and will carry on reading.
Thank you so much for sharing.
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written 735 days ago
cherry

Im reading Tamria and I am enjoying it very much. It is a great and easy reading book. It is well descriptive, which helps the children to picture the characters and the story. I think you chose your words carefully and I imagine you wrote and rewrote it many times to get where it is now and the results are great.
You catch and hold the reader's attention, as they are curious to know what will happen next. It is enjoyable and I think young children, which are very imaginative, can enjoy reading this book much more than any adult, because fantasy is part of their lives and you mixture all the elements very well with lots of fantasy, humor, suspense, adventure.
I am truly enjoying reading it and rated it with six stars.
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written 740 days ago
cherry

I've read only two chapters from 'Degree of Exposure', as this is all the time I had left for reading today, but I wished I had more hours in my day to read all the chapters of this book in one go.
It is funny, entertaining, well written. A wonderfull piece of work. It may need a bit of editing, but I can not actually judge editing or punctuation, as English is not my first language. I can only say that this is a great book and I look forward reading some more tomorrow evening, when I may have some more time. I am rating it with 6 stars and adding to my watching list. As soon as it is possible it should be on my shelf for a few days for support, as it deserves, but I am happy to back it at any time when it get closer to the editor's desk.
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written 740 days ago
cherry

Hi Derek,

I don't know if you will ever read this as it seems you don't visit this site very often, but I chose your book randomly and I think I did the right choice. I loved the first chapter of the book and I will keep reading it. It flows nicely and it held my attention for the hole chapter. There were one or two parts I thought it was missing a comma at the beginning as I needed to re-read to understand and there are a few bits at the first 3 paragraphs which I am not sure if it is missing something and was misspelled or if it is just my bad English, as English is not my first language, but apart from two or three lines that I didn't quite understand,you really got me into the story and I could picture the scenary. I rated it with 6 stars as I am really enjoying it and I will carry on reading it. As soon as I have some space it may go to my bookshelf for support as I think it deserves.
Cheers
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written 741 days ago
cherry

I backed Things That Happen in Restaurants by mistake when I was trying to add it to my watching list to read later. Thanks God I did, because I would either have to remove it from my shelf or start reading it straight away and I chose to start reading. The book is still on my shelf and it will be there for a few days to give it the support it needs to go up in the rank. It is a beautiful and well written story and I am enjoying every single line of what you write. Thanks for having written it. I am giving it 6 stars and will leave it on my shelf for a few days. I am sure many people will read it and it will be very successfull. I rotate books on my shelf after they are there for a few days, but when you get closer to the editor's desk as you will, please do not hesitate to ask me to back your book again as it will be a pleasure.
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written 742 days ago
cherry

The Chimera Factor is a masterpiece. I've read the first 5 chapters and I am truly enjoying reading it. It is very well written and every chapter I read it becomes more and more interesting. The medical terms don't upset me as Im quite used not to understand at least 10-15% of a book I read. The plot of the story is very interesting and well built to motivate me to keep reading to find out what is going to happen and i think this is what makes a good book to stand out. I am adding to my bookshelf for a few days for support and I am rating it with 6 stars. If later on you need my support again when it gets closer to the editor's desk, please let me know.
All the best
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written 742 days ago
cherry

Thanks for sharing your poems on Authonomy, Junetee.
I love poems but it's been more than 10 years since I wrote my last one. I don't generally read poems in English as I don't understand what they say and I thought it was how poetry in English was supposed to be, but you showed me that I was wrong. Please don't stop writing them as you are very talented. "I'll see you somewhere in heaven" is beautiful. Actually they are so well written, which makes it difficult to pick up this or that.I'm rating it 6 stars, but I will carry on reading it. Thanks
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written 742 days ago
cherry

The Ark of Humanity is brilliant written. I feel a bit scared to write about this book, which atlhough it is not the genre I would normally read, held my attention and impressed me more than any other I have read under the same category. The second thing which scares me to talk about the book is because my English is not good enough to describe in clear words how much I enjoyed reading it and how talented I think you are. I said this is not the type of book I would go for reading, but I would certainly buy as a gift and I hope to see it in the near future sold in a bookstore, because I believe it deserves to be published.
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written 742 days ago
cherry

Ache in my heart is at the same time poetry and music but much deeper. It guides you to to think about what you hear but don't actually listen. It gives you the tools to get to your own conclusion, but first it gives you the directions you may follow to be able to get that conclusion. It forces you to think and re-think what you first thought it was clear enough. I find it powerfull but at the same time sweet to the right measure to not impose anything as right or wrong. I like a few songs by Led Zeppelin, but not a great fan. I know that if I knew more about them the book would make much more sense to me, but I like the style and the purpose. I think this book has a great message and it is beautifull. I rate it 6 stars because i truly believe it deserves and it should be read by everybody, no matter if they are Led Zeppelin fans or not. Well done.

Eddie
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written 743 days ago
cherry

Hi Joe,
It is easy to understand why your book is in so many shelves. I hate to read books like this, because I don't want to stop and I don't have an easy life. I need to be awake very early tomorrow, but was reading your book and a few like your until now. It takes so much of my little time, but then it is great to read stories that makes me want more and more. Thank you for sharing the book. I will keep reading it. I am taking out of my shelf for a while to give some support to others in higher position, but I would like to back your book again whenever you get closer to the editors desk, because I believe in this book.
Cheers
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written 744 days ago
cherry

Hi Alison,

I had your book on my shelf for a long tim, but I couldn't remember how the story developed. As I still had it on my watching list I decided to read a chapter, but I am now on chapter three and I just would like to say that I don't want to stop reading it. It is funny, it is easy-reading. It is wonderful. You are a great writer and your book brought me inside the story. I can easily picture their house, the girls, Martin and on chapter two how she scrapped the chocolate from the biscuits and then ate them all. I need to have a rotate of books on my shelf, but it will be a pleasure to back your book in the future again if u need. I truly hope Alice succeed dieting and that 'Who wants to diet anyway' have a great and happy end. Thank you for sharing this book.
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written 941 days ago
cherry

Great book and great and intriguing storyline, rich detailed. One of the few books I have found that are really easy reading, but at the same time stylish and a real classic. English is not my first language, so I struggled here and there, but it is really enjoyable reading it.
I gave it 6 stars. I just wished I could have a bigger bookshelf to leave it there until the end, but I will leave it on my bookshelf as long as I can.
Thanks for sharing it and I am sure at some point this book will be published and sold everywhere.
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written 946 days ago
cherry

The story is well written and with the right audience it will have the merits it deserves.
I don't follow football, so some terms there were like greek to me, but it didn't stop me to understand the story and like it very much.

I am not an expert in this genre or in any other genre, but I thought the police solved the kidnap too fast. I would like to read more before the ending.

I think this would work great a series.and I am sure boys will love reading it.
Im giving it 5 stars.
Edinaldo Santo
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written 951 days ago
cherry

It is impossible to read this book and not imagine Tommy going through his adventures.
It is a great story for children and it would be great to see the illustrations to check if Tommy is any close to how I started imagining him.
This is one of those books to read many times and to keep forever.
Lisa is a brilliant author and will receive all the stars possible.
Thanks for sharing with us.

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written 951 days ago
cherry

Great book with a well written story. Dahlia has a way to use the words which is catching and holding my attention longer than I expected when I started reading the book.
I has a great flow and quite easy reading.
Im glad I picked this book from many others to read and I truly recommend it.

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