Clearly a hugely intelligent book by a hugely intelligent author. This is precisely why my 23:30 brain-mush is unable to cope with the cleverness of the caterpillar. I am leaving this on my WL for a different day, one where my brain hasn't departed and Dan Brown just won't do. I expect one of thos... view book

Hi Jo, Just taking a quick peek to start. First impression, plot is going to pull me in, pitch already did. There is a little bit of telling going on here, with some weak verbs appearing too, indicated by the use of 'quickly' for example. Instead of saying something like: 'he quickly made his w... view book

You have just filled my last space on the WL Zane. It looks like I have some reading to do. The pitch gets me interested. Clive's comment has me hooked. view book

Backing this as requested by your supportive friend Greg Bevan-Jones. I can't bear to see I've Been Deader move up in place of Isabel. view book

As requested, read (first chapter only for now) and rated. I can't really add anything to the multitude of comments below, which sum up things nicely. view book