I love the sense of urgency your writing brings from the first page. I do think it needs some work still, but it's very imaginative. I enjoyed reading it, which is something I haven't been able to say to many people on here. I am putting it on the shelf. This book will join the 'one' other I hav... view book

I love the sense of urgency your writing brings from the first page. I do think it needs some work still, but it's very imaginative. I enjoyed reading it, which is something I haven't been able to say to many people on here. I am putting it on the shelf. This book will join the 'one' other I hav... view book

You're good, but I'm sure you know that. The characters are very real and the detail you put into this is well thought out. I've only read the first few chapters so far, but I plan to finish it. I wish there was something I could say that you need to work on, but if there is such a thing I could ... view book

Your tag got me hooked, how it starts with a slap and ends with a war. Very compelling. You have a strong voice. My only problem with this is that you are telling more than showing. I don't want to be told what happened between these girls or how the war started. I want to experience it. Other... view book