Really humorous start to the story, loved the names of the places and people you chose. You have a lyrical flow to your writing, and it comes across in a soft conversational way, which I like a lot. Your characters are colourful and vibrant. This and the dialogue ass feeling and pace to the text.... view book

Hiya again Angela. Good beginning, sounds like me at the moment. Love the sentence 'Very few things are close to my heart and so writing this book is like copying and pasting me onto the paper.’ Written like an author. Great introduction, leaving the reader with an interesting question to reaso... view book

Erie start, with some very good description. Like the hammer horrors, that scared me when I was younger. Excellent use of imagery and it uses all of the reader’s senses. Drawing them in like a fly in a web. I started to feel dread, knowing death was close, and was wondering what would happen next.... view book

Yarg review. Excellent start, you set the mood and hook the reader in. You move the reader on with a mixture of action and suspense. Dialogue nicely woven in creating dynamic scenes, which introduce the characters. Love the end of the first chapter, how could a person not carry on reading. Yo... view book

A strong book, excellently written. You lead us on a journey that is full of demons and spiritual light. Your words are strong and fascinating and give a person much to think about. It certainly did me. You don’t come over as condescending or patronising, even though some of the contents is dark.... view book