I love the opening paragraph - great hook to entice readers and yet it's poetic and gives a strong sense of voice right from the start. The author has a fluid, easy to read style that is vivid with the physical feelings this girl was going through. I think Emma creates an instant sense of sympathy w... view book

What I enjoy (and admire) most about Declan's work is the conversational and yet distinct voice, and as I begin to read his latest, that voice rings clear. He draws the reader into the story and holds you there as if he were doing it in person. Love this new thriller plot and I may report back later... view book

This is the unexpected book and I'm excited - fresh and dangerous premise, tight prose and a smooth, swift flow. Great work - I want to read all of it. view book

I admit, I always read Ms. Wells because I love her eloquence and style. Cypher's description raised questions, and readers are taken immediately right to the heart of Katherine. Choosing present tense is brilliant and the succinct dialogue I've come to expect from Violet is as (or more) intriguing ... view book

I just completed reading the 10 chapters you've uploaded (I had to -- it's wonderful) and I believe this original and richly-layered story has a promising future. Lorelai (perfect name, by the way) is a girl I wanted to follow along her journey. You've given her depth and complexity, and she's a ver... view book