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written 10 days ago
cherry

Nice Opening ... RT view book

written 66 days ago
cherry

Personally I love a clean inbox. RT view book

written 66 days ago
cherry

I've re-uploaded the rest of the book. Some glitch erased all the chapters but they're back there now. Hope you enjoy reading where it goes from there! RT view book

written 109 days ago
cherry

"Deputy Ciro unrolled his window, letting the cool air in, as he took his foot off the brake and slowly pulled ahead toward the man kneeling in the street.

He called it in to dispatch ..."

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by Rian Torr
Hell Falls Behind
Fyremane & The Feral Knight
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written 142 days ago
cherry

I can tell you enjoy writing. It's also apparent that you take great care with every nuance of what is happening in your story. Something about the title of your book strikes me as especially original. Backed. RT view book

written 193 days ago
cherry
written 193 days ago
cherry

Lots of dense paragraphs! Good descriptions. RT view book

written 193 days ago
cherry

Love it!!! RT view book

written 199 days ago
cherry

Great material! RT view book

written 493 days ago
cherry

Great cover!

Rian Torr
New London Masquerade
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written 493 days ago
cherry

You use a lot of dialogue, which is good.

RianTorr
New London Masquerade view book

written 493 days ago
cherry

Lots of dialogue, well done.

RianTorr
New London Masquerade view book

written 493 days ago
cherry

Nice opening lines, love Sydney.
Rian Torr
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written 493 days ago
cherry

Nice details. RT view book

written 496 days ago
cherry

Great beginning, can't wait to read more!
Rian Torr
New London Masquerade view book

written 496 days ago
cherry

We have all been there, trying to sell too many turnips, caught late for coming home! Work smart, not hard fellow writers! Love the title.
Rian Torr
New London Masquerade view book

written 497 days ago
cherry

Nice atmospheric setting, thoroughly fleshed out writing, good dialogue. Nice short paragraphs, good pace. RT view book

written 497 days ago
cherry

I like Chapter 3's opening line the best so far. RT view book

written 497 days ago
cherry

Great voice. Good subject matter. Strong opening. Five Stars. First person, historical--well balanced paragraphs. Steady pace. Well done.
Rian Torr,
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written 500 days ago
cherry

Great title! Perhaps shorten some paragraphs for faster pace. Love the historical roots.
Rian Torr
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