I usually hate prologues. I didn't hate yours -- it seemed to me that it did exactly what prologues should do. You've got a great idea for a story here, and fabulous execution with impeccable dialogue. Straight to the shelf with no complaints. view book

See, my high-school years weren't like this. The more media I read and see on teenage years, the more I'm convinced I went to the most boring high-school ever. My own lamentations of wasted youth aside, I found this to be a powerful, stark, and well-written story. No complaints from me, sir -- ba... view book

You know, I kinda dig this. Your sense of humor shines through in the book, and though I'm not usually a fan of fantasy, I found this quite readable. The only advice I have for you (and it's been given to me a bunch, as well) is to watch your use of adverbs and make sure it doesn't become *over*use.... view book

This is an outstanding piece of work -- beautifully written, perfect description, and great suspense. I wouldn't have thought Thriller and Romance could have gone together, but you've proven me wrong. Great stuff, and on my shelf, as I have nothing to nitpick. :) view book

I really enjoyed this, sir. I've always dug the idea of a flawed superhero -- they all seem a bit "Abercrombie and Fitch" to me, and I always kinda wondered why the good-looking people got all the superpowers. I read the first couple of chapters, and found it amazingly entertaining and quite funny i... view book