The humour is still flowing freely - i'm really enjoying this. give us a few more chapters and i'll be looking for space on my shelf. :-)
This is a great start. There are a few typos but nothing that can't be fixed easily. You have a great voice for your Morgan and her character shines through her speech and thoughts. Hopefully you will put some more up before too long - I'm really interested in where you are going to go with this.