Hey Katherine, I enjoyed this. It's a very different premise. there are a couple of minor things from the first chapter. I don't think you need to state that Pete really care's about his sister. We'll find that out in due course of the story I'm sure. I also think you are over-playing the Precious n... view book

I'm guessing from your message you are disillusioned with comments so not sure if I should write anything here! Anyway, I found this an easy read. So much so that I stopped thinking about the writing and just got into the story very quickly. I hope you get published. view book

I'm guessing from your message you are disillusioned with comments so not sure if I should write anything here! Anyway, I found this an easy read. So much so that I stopped thinking about the writing and just got into the story very quickly. I hope you get published. view book

I found this a very easy read. Like some below have said, I am concerned that this genre has been done to death (pun intended!) and that I don't see anything particularly new here. You even have the whole sexy vampire thing going on early on. That said, I enjoyed reading it and wanted to read more... view book

I like it! It's an easy read and exactly the sort of story I love. I really hope you get published. view book