Wow....I really don't know what else to say. Wow. What a haunting, painful story that rips at the heart. I am not quite sure what to say, because I am still processing it, and it is too painful for me to read over again for any specific suggestions. Oh, I do have one. My biggest compliment is that w... view book

Hi Lesa:) This is my much overdue reading of your book - I am so sorry for the delay. I read the first two chapters of "FInding Us", and very much enjoyed how just the first paragraph sucks the reader into this story. I especially admired the following parts - "yesterday's make-up and some hairy ... view book

Hi Carol, Just read your first two chapters....what a lovely story you have blooming here! Your descriptive voice is very strong, and ushered me quickly into feeling as though I was standing right there in the kitchen with Bess and Mary. I felt so sorry for the poor injured horse....and also ... view book

Hi there, Just read your first two chapters. Wow! I love your writing style. The story is easy to follow and not overly worded - I love how you have so many gems sprinkled throughout - "heart climbing my rib cage", "panicky animal", "brittle joy" - stunning use of descriptives. You are the type o... view book

Hi Bart, I've decided to read all your chapters here. This morning I read Chapter 1. I really enjoyed reading this. Our pastor discussed the issue of no one expecting Jesus to resurrect in much the same way that you addressed it here - all very good points! You speak with a strong voice and illu... view book