Hi Sherilyn. Part of my purpose on Authonomy is to back Christian writing that I think has merit. To that end I’ve read parts of your "A Dream to Share" and backed it. I think it would do very well targeted at a teen or YA market. The writing is straightforward, and I didn't seek any technical weakn... view book

Hi Vreneli. Part of my purpose on Authonomy is to back Christian writing that I think has merit. To that end I’ve read parts of your "With Such Enemies" and backed it. You've put together a realistic but still dramatic story, and the writing serves it well. I particularly thought the dialog has a na... view book

Great concept here, a great opportunity for comment on the modern world. I've got one critique which is would mean a lot of work if you follow up on it, so I hope it doesn't discourage you, because I think you've done well here in seeing through a great premise. Since you're going with multiple firs... view book

I don't read a lot of fantasy, but it seems to me that dragons are somewhat overlooked as protagonists. You've written a nicely lyrical tale here, and the names you've chosen hit just the right tone. I like this quite a bit. I didn't see any technical weaknesses in what I read, either. I hope this d... view book

Your writing suits your genre well, particularly your action sequences. I didn't see any technical weaknesses in the parts I read. I'm quite sure this would find a broad market among your target audience. Happy to back this for you. If you’re so inclined, please take a look at “The Job: Based on a ... view book