I find the first few paragraphs of the book very vivid and engaging. It is definitely the kind of thriller I enjoy reading. I think you would enjoy my book 'The Law of the Barrator', which reads in a similar vein. I shall keep reading Banner and Iook forward to any comments on my book you may have. view book

It has been a long time since I have read a novel involving pirates, and I like the way you are adding something new to the genre. I have read the first five chapters and I think the pace and tone of the piece is very fitting for your story, it has a lot of character. I will enjoy reading more and I would very much appreciate it if you could have a look at my own novel, The Law of the Barrator, on the site. Best of luck. view book

Thanks indeed. Taking all comments on board. view book

Thanks for the advice Hermione, will take it on board. Will edit the 'clunky' words, and continue revising the book. Practice makes perfect!

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This is not the type of book I would usually read but it is engaging, fun and, from what I have read so far, it manages to keep its focus on plot throughout. The pace and length of each chapter is good, and I would like to read more. view book