Hello Mick, Your story has an unique and compelling characteristic which caught me by surprise. The affect of the reflective narrative had an large emotional impact. As I read chapter one, I increasingly became more concerned for the main character's problems despite its dark characteristics. In ... view book

Brilliant job! This is a very engaging plot and I have just read the first two chapters so far. You added an interesting twist to the mysterious psychic in that she seems otherworldly. The foreshadowing here was powerful as well when she entered the barren, dusty shop just as the door closed behind ... view book

This is quite a twist on the story of King Arthur and Merlin :}. A very creative one at that. I liked how you mixed suspense and horror with an unique plot. As mentioned before, I found the dialogue between the family members very entertaining. I think I even understand why you wrote the prologue yo... view book

Hello James, I read chapter one, and I love how you wrote this section.The first half reminds of a parable (which I love). It is simplistic, entertaining and to the point. Sometimes I think the simplest forms that are present in fairy tales are the best way to tell a message. I liked part tw... view book

Hello Bill, I'm going to do several reviews, but just one at a time since I have several books to catch up on. I read chapter one, and as a fan of HF I loved it :]. Even though at the moment I write a fantasy novel, I still haven't forgotten my HF roots. I found your action packed, symbolic and ... view book