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LisaToohey

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Lisa lives in Ontario Canada with her husband Matt, her overgrown puppy Jericho and their wayward stray, Tom the cat. She loves to stay active by taking regular hikes with her dog, and they recently began agility training together. When she isn't working or playing with her pup, Lisa can be found volunteering at her church, cooking delicious dinners, and writing. Her current project is The Science Fiction novel 'Nickolas'
At 23 Lisa knows that she still has a lot of figuring out to do in life. She has big dreams for her future and the work ethic to achieve them.

favourite books

Anything by Mercedes Lackey or Tamora Pierce, I also enjoy Maria V. Snyder, Kristin Britain, Robin Hobb and Guy Gavriel Kay. My all time favorite book is Watership Down.

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Nickolas

Lisa Toohey

After crashing on a strange planet, Nickolas must fight for his right to survive. Can this Gyan wanderer ever find a way off Earth?


Nickolas hates his new life on Earth. Since crashing he has been subject to one disaster after the other. He struggles with the balance between 'being human' and being himself. The humans around him continue to experiment on their captives, forcing them into an Assimilation program, and torturing information from their uncooperative subjects.

When Nickolas becomes less than cooperative they take drastic measures to control him. When he refuses to assismilate he is handed over to the Beast with the face of a man, who is a master of torture. Nickolas is given one last chance to become a balanced 'human' but, after the pycholgical damaged caused he refuses to speak or trust anyone.

He believes his barriers impenetrable until a human named Quinn walks into his life. She shows him a new side of humanity and he learns to trust again. He is willing to do anything to protect her, until the underground contacts him. They could be his ticket home, if he is willing to follow their lead. Now he is forced to choose between following the undeground and fighting his way home or Quinn the one person in the world that cares for him.

 

The Heir

Lisa Toohey

Everything Rane knew as truth is changing. Now, in a strange world she must find her future and accept her past.


The first story is based around Rane and her entry into the world, her personal struggle against what fate has decided she should be. Rane slowly discovers her magical potential and the very big shoes she must learn how to fill.

Stepping into the spotlight is a hard thing for a girl whose previous goal in life was being invisible. Rane and her friends work to complete the prophecy set out by the last queen two hundred years ago. This ancient queen foretells the cataclysm that damaged the magical city below the sea called Illusien, making it uninhabitable. Rane has to find a way to repair the glass dome that shielded the city, fight off the long time enemies of her new people and figure out who she really wants to be in life.

Throughout the story Rane is guided by the spirit of the last queen who speaks to her inside her head and helps her learn to control her powers.

 

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Fiona Haven wrote 4 hours ago

Hi Lisa, Would you be interested in joining the Sci Fi critique grou....

Fiona Haven wrote 2 days ago

Hello Lisa, A while ago you reviewed Falling Upwards. Just letting ....

L.Lombard wrote 2 days ago

Yay! I got it! :D

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Scott Butcher wrote 2 days ago

Ah, now I know what you look like. It's good to put a face to a perso....

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I wrote 19 days ago

Falling Upwards. Pitches: I would try to simplify the wording, they seem like a bit of a mouthful right now! My favourite tool is www.prowritingaid.com it can point out things like sticky sentences. Chapter one: I noticed a typo in his diary. Realised instead of realized. I found parts wor... view book

I wrote 54 days ago

hey I finally popped in for a read! I loved how he thinks of the shoppers as fish, you do so well at.pulling us into his off kilter thought process! I did notice a typo in chapter.2 when he is talking about where he lived before the 'high tide house' he says last lace instead of last place. it... view book

I wrote 55 days ago

Chapter one Your work reminds me of orson scott cards enders game. I found your first paragraph a little wordy and I’m not sure it is needed. I got that he is a genius and all that from how he learns. Unless seeing his dead mother and being aware of the womb is essential to the plot I would con... view book

I wrote 69 days ago

Prologue I found your prologue a little wordy, you like to use elaborate descriptions of how people say things. I suggest using a website called prowritingaid.com. It is really great tool. I found it lacking a lot of details, what is the void, what does it look like ect. Spending a few words to b... view book

I wrote 71 days ago

I would suggest reading your work allowed to study the flow of the writing, the major thing that struck me was the amount of musing for a fast paced situation. I think it detracted from the urgency of his situation. His wording is sometimes very clear, using large words, but then he slips into slang... view book

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