Smoothly written. Unfortunately didn't get to the ghost part as only time for the first chapter, but enjoyed the struggle captured in Saira - felt trapped for her! Very good. Stars and backing. Good luck. view book

I read one and bit chapters - only time stopped me from reading on. Great writing style - wonderful descriptions, at one point I had to remind myself to breathe as the dust was only on the page! You also showed your skill at capturing different rhythms for the two main characters. High rating and wa... view book

Hey Patrizia, I read the synopsis and first chapter (time is always escaping me!) I won't bother give you feedback on the grammar - I'm sure you've had your fill :) First of all I loved the synopsis; the randomness of it appealed to my love of words. You've obviously lead an amazingly deep life a... view book

Wonderful piece of writing and great double cliff hanging end to chapter 1. I forgot I was reading a piece aimed at a younger market. Very good. Stars and watch list :) view book

Aaaarrrgggghhhh why don't I have more time! Loved the concept, writing (beautiful prose to it) and pace. Lots of stars and good luck! view book