Have so far read chapters 1 and 2. First off I'd like to say that the autobiographical feel of the book is quite nice. Chapter 1 is good, although I feel that the opening conversation with the taxi driver is a little juddery. But otherwise I see nothing wrong. The remainder of the chapter is good bu... view book

Great starting prologue. The introduction to the twins and their feuding is well written and worded well. Noticed possible mistake near end of prologue: "but they, nor he," may be changed to "but neither they, nor he". Just a little observation. Otherwise a great prologue that keeps the interest of ... view book

Have read chapters 1-7 and am going to read more. Truly a fantastic book. My intention was to read a little and come back later but I couldn't help but keep reading. A wonderful creation which carries the fantasy genre in a charming way. Easy to read with a good plot and well written. I am not an ex... view book

Did you get the name of Denton city from "A Touch of Frost?" Just a random thought. lol. Saw your first comment too and I have to say that I don't think it's that slow in the first chapter. I found it easy to get into but that could just be me. What's a "Wharfie" btw? Might be worth explaining that... view book

Have read chapters 1 to 3. I like the direction that this book starts off in. The intro into the cold war is well told, helping to ease the reader into the story and build interest. The rest of the book keeps the interest built and the descriptions help to heighten the reading ("his head was throbbi... view book