First I really like the eerie scene, I really felt like a child again, it's cleary wanted to read to child by their parents whilst the moon sits high in the sky. I really like your writing style and teh character Finger Bones grabs my attention and makes me want more.
Well done and keep up the good work.
Andrew Pemberton. view book

Aubree
For our read swap:
Very good first chapter, very well written as well as a good plot line. I was hooked and really enjoyed this and will be backing and giving good stars. view book

Thank you for the comment!
The first chapter is rather good and I think that your writing style is very good and very creepy, I like your description as it is well thought out, the overall first chapter is good and I have no flaws with it. view book

Very Good, The first chapter is amazing it really got me hooked and has everything that I, myself really enjoy in a book. Really good first chapter.

Badbadclown
"The Ballard Of Darkness And Blood." view book