It took me two days to read all thirty two chapters. I've been checking regularly to see if you have downloaded more. This is a very good story, what are you waiting for? LOL. Lisa view book

Hello Sarah, You have a very strong premise for a book. I like it. In my opinion you are a very detail oriented writer. My writing style is similar and different from yours. Similar in the direct approach. Different because your sentences are very long. I'm not saying it's wrong but in my opinion ... view book

Hello Starla, I have read the first three chapters of your book and could totally relate to the characters. I felt the guy at the gym was creepy and in my humble opinion you did a good job of setting up creepy circumstances. That situation made me want to read on to find out what would happen next.... view book

This looks like a great premise for a ya novel. I did not read it all but it looks interesting. The school principal is principal and not principle. I like the story but I felt distant from the characters. I think you should try writing this book in first person with Amethyst as the protagonist. I... view book

Hello, I have added your book to my watchlist. I will read more later. There are several grammatical errors in your writing. I've noticed quite a few errors with tense and sentence structure. For example, the sentence beginning dirty politics had reached. there should be a the (definite article)... view book