Return read and YARG review of chapter 1 and 2. Overall I enjoyed what I read. You describe well the feelings of a young boy hiding his sexuality from his friends. You've done so without feminizing your character which is something I've come across more than once recently. It's nice to see boys b... view book

YARG review - I'm loving this. I'm trying to think of something to crit, but quite honestly there's nothing jumping out at me. I've read the first 4 chapters and will definitely be coming back to read more. I feel kind of linked to this on a personal level because I live just next to the rive... view book

An interesting little story! I liked the idea of a little adventure breaking up the monotony of everyday life. David and Sue just went out for a takeaway and had a strange experience. Nice idea. :) You need to watch your punctuation and spelling though. I made a few notes as I read. Watch your... view book

YARG- I'm going to be really nitpicky here because overall I really enjoyed the couple of chapters that I read. :) Chapter 1: (reiterating this is really picky)... 'As JC reaches the top, his foot slips on the muddy bank as he tries to pull himself up. fortunately JC deftly regains his ba... view book

I sat down to read a couple of chapters and ended up reading the whole book! Great story which kept me clicking on to the next chapter again and again. The pace was great and I had lots of questions throughout which you answered at the end. The only thing I would say was the pace in the final chapte... view book