This is a wonderful piece of work, a real classic in progress. I finished reading the first chapter and had to go on to chapter two. Your characterization is wonderful, very authentic. You have also done your research brilliantly. Very vivid at almost every point drawing out emotions. Happy to shelf... view book

Oh shiver! What a chapter! You drew me in with the dark cloud and then threw in these wonderful character's I knew would be victims. Your dialogue is wonderful, some of the best I've read on this site. I can see why this is climbing the charts so fast. :o) Up on my shelf. Stauna view book

Very interesting. Not my normal type read but this is phenomenal. between the clips of poetry and descriptive explanations, I was completely drawn inward and onward. This will be on my shelf for a very long time. :o) Stauna view book

First of all your pitch is intriguing, then you manage to pull it off with flying colors. I liked your characters immediately. The interesting combination of angels and demons (with the demon being the sympathizer) as well as every day folk is awesome and at the end of the chapter I know this is on... view book

Fascinating first chapter. Having your protagonist in first person is brilliant. I had tears in my eyes toward the end of the chapter. What can I say? This is really something. I'm excited to read more about Dane to find out what will happen. Until then, up on my shelf. :o) Stauna view book