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John Lovell

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Hello there. I have the greatest ideas and characters ever created. The dialogue and the story are good enough, but the prose is very wibble wobble - it just doesn't have the edge that is needed for the market.

What I'm hoping for at the moment is a co-author. If you happen to be an amazing writer but are having trouble imagining a world or story that will grip the next generation of kids then look no further because I have a series of six planned. One of which is below called "Jason Crowther: The Sword of Barra".

I do have reason to have massive confidence in my creations and characters, probably more so to have doubt in my writing abilities.


If you would like to contact me my email is johnlovell@live.co.uk or simply just send a message on here.

Oh yes, and please only read Jason Crowther if it's something you'd genuinely enjoy. I'm writing the sequel at the moment, moving home and starting a new job so I won't have time to return reads.

A big thank you to the following who have read all of Jason Crowther:

Adam Oster

Mark Cain - Also made the cover

Nathan (Kestrelraptorial)

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Jason Crowther: Knights of Aso....

John Lovell

Those who are not yet dead, but don't belong to the living are rising. The Knights of Asora return.


This is a work in progress. It is the second in a series of six. I've put it up for those who have read The Sword of Barra and want to see my work as I go along.

Please do not read this if you haven't read the first one.

 

Jason Crowther: The Sword of B....

John Lovell

In Asora, an ancient king's weapon returns to the Fields of the Fallen to become a young boys first mission. The Sword of Barra waits.


During what was not an ordinary day, London is attacked by hordes of winged monsters. Jason Crowther is rescued by his substitute teacher and transported to a mystical world, Asora.

Jason attends Greenhearts, an academy for Hearts, who live a life of honor and service. He wants to pass the rigorous and dangerous training, but it’s not going to be easy with fear-ridden Molly, clumsy Fawn, forgetful Marcus, arrogant Carrig and disaffected Robin as squad mates.

They are taken to the Fields of the Fallen, to each choose an ancient weapon. As Jason grabs the Sword of Barra, he sees a glimpse of his future. Somebody will attempt to kill him, and he’s not the only one with worries. His fellow squad members each see something too.

Jason discovers the true reason he’s on Asora and inadvertently gets kidnapped. Can the other five forget their differences to save their friend?

 

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I wrote 2 days ago

Just finished chapter 1. This is pretty good so far. There's one sentence where "Surprised" is used twice and it sounds a little ugly but other than that I really enjoyed the style. The dialogue used so far is excellent even though there isn't a great deal of it. 'Their heads, take their heads" i... view book

I wrote 30 days ago

WTF review Hey Pat, I've just finished reading chapter 2 again (I'd read it last week but was rushed out of home before I got to comment). And I've enjoyed it so far. Just on thing I noticed that perhaps doesn't need to be there. "metallic blue colour" - You can probably lose "colour" One o... view book

I wrote 50 days ago

I've just read chapters 6,7 and 8 All of this is really interesting stuff. I feel sorry for this Lily girl though and it's cool that she actually had dreams even though you said many of the students didn't have any. The 6th chapter so far is my favourite, telling that kid to stop taking credi... view book

I wrote 51 days ago

Just read chapters 3 and 4. Great work on keeping the story alive with some excellent character development. I wasn't expecting Neve to open up so early about Alex's death but this is a good thing because it shows a bit of trust that she has towards Jay. And damn I hated that gang of boys, I c... view book

I wrote 52 days ago

Hello Jo, I'm taking a read of "Hello World" - I'm not after a return read of any sort, the red headed image on the cover grabbed my attention and I was needed to replace a book on my shelf so I thought why not? I've just finished chapter 2 and I'm so far massively impressed on a huge scale. T... view book

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