Hi Lenny, I read 1-3 and 10. The writing flows nicely. The writing could be tightened up some but most unedited works share that trait. The early character development is done particularly well and that will, of course, lend greater force to the way the characters evolve as the book progresses. A... view book

Hi Jennifer, I comment to be of whatever small help I may be in improving a manuscript. I'm just an amateur so whatever I have to say is just the opinion of a reader who loves to read. For whatever help they may be to you, my thoughts as they occur while reading follow: Chap 1: - Honoria's ap... view book

The book begins with a quote by Pablo Picasso. A more appropriate choice could not have been made. Here is a writer whose word strokes splash vivid color across the canvas of the page with imagery every bit as subtle and daring as a grandmaster's painting. Great works of art show hidden truths, reve... view book

The book begins with a quote by Pablo Picasso. A more appropriate choice could not have been made. Here is a writer whose word strokes splash vivid color across the canvas of the page with imagery every bit as subtle and daring as a grandmaster's painting. Great works of art show hidden truths, reve... view book

My 2nd review here on authonomy and I am going to use what I learned from my first to make this one as useful as I can, i.e. opening the book in two tabs so that I can comment while reading. My comments are simply how the work strikes me as a reader. I am by no means an expert in anything. My intent... view book