As others have said before the prologue was really great..the little boy discovering the missing girl and the explosion...However my only thought is that you then left the story and started off in the present..I found myself skipping through scenes to see what happened in the past..I think there nee... view book

I only read the first three chapters but I like the friendship between Fajar and Binh. Their work at McD's and subsequent firing added a little bit of humor to the story. I thought the way that the school teacher told her about her fathers death was a little harsh. Most of the time a family membe... view book

I think you setup Nick's character when he encounters the bully Bruno Doyle and stands up for himself. It's also telling of how his character doesn't react to everyone else pain through the rest of the school year. I'm not sure why you fast forward the story 17 years, but list the date for 2009..i... view book

Very funny scene when Berk ask for another drink even though he just woke up from a drinking binge from the night before..A lot of whitty dialogue between Berk and his brother Lofty...I have to say that I love Berk's motto..if only we could all live by that instead of hoping for a different past..I ... view book

I only read the first three chapters, but I liked how the story opened. You really get a feel for Sin the main character and his beliefs about heaven and hell. The little bit about his childhood (his mother sleeping with men) revealed a lot about why he's the way he's..I wish you would include mor... view book