Retcon- The title captured me to click on it and the short pitch told me everything! Jet remea has delivered most powerful words- in jet speed!!!. I am so thrilled to say that I never...ever read a book with such involvement as I did with this book. Highly starred and on my W/L.

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Hi,
I am back again. I read this book a few days ago and rated high and gave a profound advice as a comment.. But I had been haunted by both, Yuko Zen and the ghost city girl, I have no choice... No where to go... SO I AM BACKING THE GHOST CITY GIRL..If anyone thinks that I am exaggerating, may Kichi Honda make sense to you.

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A Darn fiction... or may be an epic? Time and again, If mother decides to protect her child, not even God can interfere. period. Emma may rightfully boast herself, as a writer and an author, but she just got the right nerve of the reader, with most realistic description of a most realistic fact. ( Hey. I am appreciating this book. In my own way. I had this habit-may be a bad habit- of typing my firsthand feelings without edit, when I happen to read a good book like this.)

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Hi Warrick and Vikas,

Thank you so much for reading this crap called SoulTran. I admit to you that I am a thinker, lives mostly in creative fantasy, but not a born writer. As soon as I uploaded this work, I felt like removing it and work on it. But i restrained myself from doing so, because readers like you will really polish my work. I will keep this response as a comment, until you both respond to me that you are satisfied with my edit. Once again thank you for bringing a best 'SoulTran'

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Sleeping with gods- A fantastic dream every man wish to get into.I read three chapters. been carried away into lucid dreams of flirting with celebrities and billionaires( Beauty and Booty)Highly starred and on my W/L

My second book on authonomy is a NaNoWriWee book called SoulTran. I would really appreciate your feed back

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I just finished 1 chapter reading second time. Wow! What a great visual feast! Do we still need a movie? when the master narrator makes you feel that you were just there( I could still hear the screeching sound of metal against metal, with associated burning smells! You have to read it to believe the power of words. A couple of typos:

We passed teenagers (of) our age
Don't worry. I'm(I) know what I'm doing
I would love to read next chapter( I need a little break, though). Highly rated as this book deserves, would love to back it at the soonest.

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Hello readers of authonomy. You have a choice. Either you read this book or barrow visor from Simon and just see it.
What a captivating book! Instantly hooked!! Highly starred and on my W/L. It is truly 'Simon says' kind of book. you don't believe me? Just read a few sentences. On the way to my shelf.

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killing innocent duty-bound soldiers is not a war. The real war is- standing up against the manipulators of the society and extricate them. Solutions.inc is an action packed story seemingly eradicate the corporate excesses. I said seemingly because it's a fiction. A story. I wish it get real though. Highly starred and on my W/L

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ROMA LYCANTHROPA- A magnificient epic read hybridized with werewolfs,blood suckers and dark powers. Michael is the master of language. He is almost as brutal as sextus to push the reader right into Roman era. I like the names of the characters-' Perfectus Romanius!!' the story environment reminded me Ken Follet's 'Pillars of the Earth'.( Not really!. There humans are as brutal as demons here).
Michael please check the typo in last sentence of long pitch. High starred for narration. I sure will get back to read further.

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Hi Elizabeth,
I am back again. for the past one hour, I am reading, from chapter 7 through chapter 15. What a gift of comedy writing!( your husband must be so lucky? or so unhappy suffering with stomach pain like me out of exhaustive laughter?) You are insanely sane or vice versa!!! First time in my life(54 long years!) I read a book aloud, word to word(out of about 2500 books). " Yeah, Yeah, mummy's book is really doing wee...wee all over the world!". LOL. I tried to rate six stars again, but it only replaced the previous six stars. Strange, isn't it?.

I am really trying to find some typo,error or edit issue, I haven't find one yet!

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Great story:). I like the free flow of language and historical setting.

Highly starred.

My book Ozoneraser is on the verge of ED and your feed back is highly appreciated. If you think the book deserves, backing definitely shoots me to the moon!!!

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The beginning of the End- a smooth dive straight into the story. I don't like elaborate descriptions of the characters- You don't have none( sorry for double negatives!). I love dialogue and you got plenty of them!!. Will must be feeling cursed for living forever, while everybody that belongs to him, including whole humanity gone? that's a real curse!!! (Two hundred years of bicentennial man, though a humanoid, made me feel so sorry for him). Highly starred and on my W/L
My book Ozoneraser is a slip stream sci.fi. I would appreciate, If you could spend some of your valuable time to read and give your feed back. Backing would be a bonus(Smile) as it is on the verge of Ed for this month.

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Hi Jeannette,
I thank you with my heart and soul, for the fantastic comment you posted:) Like you, a few other readers expressed the desire to connect with a main character/the protagonist/A hero. The protagonist in this story is the President of United states. And as you know, he cannot jump into story earlier unless the stage is set for his total involvement. He enters in ch.4 and slowly takes control of the story as we proceed from ch.5 through ch.7, by then all diplomatic efforts go fruitless, and Washington,white house including first lady become victims. He then takes things on to himself and act as the central character till the end of the story. Ch.14. Also as you see my chapters are very big. Ozoneraser is complete,edited several times (Thanks to the authonomy readers,like you, who made it possible) and ready with approximately 84000 words.

Thank you once again for your involved reading:)

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Fascinating story! :-) Great writing. Love how you move through conversations. It seems to make your story live. It jumps into the plot with both feet, and doesnt let you off. :-) I loved the way you connected us so well to that first little family that disappeared, though, and wondered at their disappearance, who would be your hero, your protagonist- the one character or little group of characters that you would focus on. But after that, your story seemed to explode into action everywhere, and I kind of got lost as to who to focus on. I like to connect to people. I also kind of got bogged down in all the detail when the town goes crazy with everyone disappearing, till the helicopter disappears, then the plot seems to start moving again. I think in a movie, it would go faster (see Im already seeing this as a movie), it just seemed to kind of get bogged down there on a written page --for me. :-)
I love your sweet little children personalities. they add a lot of reality and light to what could be a very dark story. It makes it into the kind of book that will be widely read.
I have no edits. You really have a gift for words and putting action onto a page. :-)
As a reader, the only thing I would suggest, is to trim it down somehow. Write up an outline, of where your plot is going, and who your main characters are, focus on them, and trim the rest.
just something to think about. good luck! I'll keep you on watch to make sure you make that desk!
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The world called Auril !!!, the city of Endorin !!!. If childhood dreams are like raw diamonds, then this book is the cut and polished one with every word and expression being perfectly gauged. Gilbert ( my friend on authonomy for almost 2 years) did wrote a hypnotizing book that commands you into the deep trance of continued read. I would have read this book long before. Highly starred and on my W/L and will be on my shelf soon.


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Old Number 7: a rare book on authonomy, with a PURPOSE. I was just one among many, who witnessed the horrendous destruction caused by Hurricane Katrina. It appeared as if the Gods have a mission of creating gynormous devastation with a purpose known only to them. The writer's wish to help aid still ongoing restructure, is enough for me to buy this book(once in the market) and suggest, persuade, beg my friends to buy.

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Prologue makes you to sit on the edge of your chair!!!. Then the writer takes you slowly with a subtle sense of humor to the perils of country side living ( Like Floresville..even got a wall mart!!!) I remember attending a job interview in a small town in Georgia, of 2000 population, with one gas station, two fast food, one Chinese cafe. nearest Walmart is 32 miles away!!!) The writer displayed her mastery in language and narration. This book is a fast paced read ( I still got to get the scary stuff) So I can say for now, I really enjoyed the read and starred it high. This comment stays until I get to chapter 31.


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No Ice cream...- The writer exhibited a unique talent of narration based on authentic experiences. Events unfold at a reasonably fast pace. She vividly described how difficult very small things in life can get to- yet they are normal day to day things for the people living in those countries. Especially, for UN representatives, working in odd, war and poverty stricken environments, the basic comforts of the life would be negatively affected, but they move on with their mission.Ruko made this fact very clear. My only concern is that113,000 words may be too long for a book( average 85000). Highly starred for the research and narration. On my W/L.

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Stone bird: I just read a little and skimmed through few chapters. I should say that the writer is a literary expert. Though genre says it is a fiction but it appears like 'Harper Collin's true life...' childhood trauma always carries it's own baggage and tails with you throughout the life, all along develop some defense mechanisms like stonebird!

Highly starred and on my W/L, soon will be on my shelf,

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The trauma of pain and helplessness followed after being abused ( Verbally/sexually/brutality etc) will either subconsciously alter your personality and make you a kind of withdrawn and timid person,
or in some cases( might be due to severity of trauma), do not show up directly, but hidden deep in unconscious state of mind and make a massive come back in future, In this case a condition like chronic Rheumatoid Arthritis( assumed because I read only few chapters and skimmed through few more). Sorry is a heart breaking, authentic reality of an abused victim. Those child abusers-SHAME ON YOU. As a teacher, I feel that this kind of books should be a compulsory read in high schools, so that our youth can understand the implications of abuse.

Starred and backed
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Timerunner: an interesting story with a difference. Reminds me my childhood favorite -HG Well's Time Machine. There are lot more of time travel books earlier but a common essential ingredient in all these books is that when things get threatening, the time traveler finds a safe way back into the present. First time in this book, you find a situation, where THERE IS NO COMING BACK. That is very hard!!!( Imagine a Greek soldier landing in New york city- there was a book called 'The Gladiator'- don't remember the author's name- a dead gladiator's body was dug out from deep Ice and resurrected using cryogenics).
Timerunner consistently tells you about the writer's deep vision and mastery of articulation.
Highly starred, W/L and will be on my shelf soon,

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