Hi Peter, I've read the first chapter and aside from the slight problem of your apostrophes and speech marks, (not sure what happened there), I enjoyed it. I like your style of writing, abrupt and to the point, which is always a plus in my eyes. You laid the scene and plot well and I'm intrigued by ... view book

Wow, what an interesting read. Certainly not what I was expecting but very well written and most certainly has kept me hooked from the opening paragraph. I only have had the chance to read chapter one but it is definitely going on my bookshelf and can't wait to read more. Just one thing, you made ... view book

Hi I've read four chapters and am a bit puzzled as to where the story is going. I feel you have a good basis for a storyline with three different characters but they all seem pretty similar and they all seem to have the same problems. I'll carry on reading as it has a nice flow to it and does remi... view book

Hi Elizabeth, I've just read all the chapters that you have uploaded and I like your easy use of language as it flows nicely and is very easy to read. I enjoy the subtle humour and I like that I can identify with Sarah on some aspects and am looking forward to discovering who Alan is and is he Sarah... view book

Hi, I wonder if you could clear something up for me please. Your long pitch uses the word I which made me think it was non-fiction and was about you personally but at the end of chapter one you discover that it is the dead mother talking. If it is fictional I think that maybe I would have chosen t... view book