CHIRG Sara what a great story you have here. I read all 26 chapters and it is really alive with great characters. So well written. Wishing you good luck with this one and i can see it heading to the editors desk real quick! ;) diane view book

CHIRG Hi Alan, lovely really well written. nice touches especially with Casey, the snot and of course farts! Gotta have a certain amount of these things! ;) have read all 5 chaps and could easily read more! good luck with this and i'll try and get you up on myshelf as soon as I can cheers, :... view book

Hi Kes, phew read all 31! boy you have a supreme epic here. very well thought out, and written. in this format too confusing with the names and who is related to whom and how they fit into the world. much too complicated for this site with back and forth flipping. However it does not take away th... view book

Sean, First let me say thank you so much for your service it is much appreciated. am really liking your writing style. i think the chapters are way too long and need to be split up so it reads more like the way you are writing as if you are telling the stories in a pub to some mates. i've read 3... view book

CHIRG Jessica this is absolutely lovely. the last chapter is also very useful and gives a lot of information that is both interesting and exciting. i like the story a lot lots of descriptions and local colour weaving through make it very enjoyable. i think maybe the reader would like to see pictur... view book