You have a good story that compels one to keep reading. I have noted that in Cpt 4 par 3 from the Electronic media report there is duplication of two paragraphs that i think you must look into. Otherwise good story. I have put it in my watchlist and top rated it. view book

the story is interesting but it needs some serious structuring to make it easy to read. there are also a lot of wrong use of words like mammoth to discribe numbers, check intead of cheque or maybe it is just my opinion. i think the death of tate must have a heading on it's own then you can narrate... view book

there is a good story here. you style of writing is a bit interesting because you try to make the reader a participant but i think you should not try to lead the reader into the story by phrases like " ... simply by virtue of... you know you what". the story is full of sarcasm giving an impression t... view book

i have read up to 5. you have an interesting way of writing with ligh humour that put the reader in your presence as if i hearing the story first hand. your way of discribing paints a vivid picture in the story. i will keep reading when time permits, in the mean time - six stars all the way. good lu... view book

i only commend on the story not any errors i might come along. it is a very intersting story and i read all the chapters none stop. Solange, Jurgen and the Commandant are going to have a handfull with Franck and i am looking forward to read how the axe is going to defeat the brotherhood. i have pu... view book