Love it love it! I've really been stalking this book, and have read it already several times. Looking forward to the rest!

Thanks so much for the support and stalking! I have been traveling with the hubby a lot this summer, but am ready to get back into the swing of writing and editing, which this books does need! I hope to have more loaded soon! Cheers! view book

I read all 5 chapters and enjoyed them. There may be typo in chapter 1, parag 4 wariness or worry instead of wary, right? In chapter 2, I wasn't sure what the word ton meant and it might help to explain. Good on you!

Hi Diana,
Thanks so much for the positive comments on my story. I have not had a chance to edit for typo's and such, but I appreciate the heads up on what you spotted. The "Ton" is what a certain sector of rich people in England used to be called (kind of a haughty bunch) and is a quite common reference in historical romance novels. I had to search that one when I first started reading historical romance novels myself! Do you have a book I can read on this site? I would love to if you do! Let me know. Thanks again,
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I love this and will make room to support this one. I'd buy this book.

Victoria, thank you so much for the nice comment. I really do appreciate it and the support. I saw that you have a book also, that I will certainly be reading very soon. Thanks so much, Shelly Palmer view book

Very easy to read. The dialogue seems sympathetic to the timeframe and visual imagery created superb. A delight to read...I have nothing constructive to offer. Great work.
Alison Butler

Alison,
Thanks so much for the kind feedback you offered on my story. I have backed your story before as well, and happily redeposited it back on my book shelf. I loved your story. It is so well written and flows along gracefully, even the grizzly hanging chapter! The characters are strong, as is the dialogue and the descriptions of their lives and surroundings. It was a great read, even the second time around! I have added a star backing this time since that wasn't available the first time I gave it a read. Thanks again for your support.
Shelly
A Duke From the Past
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Dude...this is a hoot!

Sorry it took me so long to get around to reading it. I have six kids man...need I say more? I really liked the story. It was funny, well thought out and flows well, and was captivating from sentence one. I can certainly see this in the bookstores for mass market and doing well. I have never backed a book I didn't like or felt worthy, trust me, (there's been few that will remain unnamed), but I've backed yours. Love it! Luck be yours!

Cheers,
Shelly
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I don't read a lot of sci-fi, but I really liked the premise of your book. There is always a strong draw when it comes to humans in a futuristic world like this and I was immediately drawn in. There are a few edits that need to be made, small things like punctuation and spelling, but other than that, I thought your writing was great. A very unique story that kept me enthralled as I read and kept me coming back for more.
Good luck to you!
Shelly Palmer
A Duke from the Past
The Scandalous Tutor view book

Dear Shelly, I thought your book was very sumptuous and romantic. Highlighted by you obvious strong descriptive text. It was pleasure reading it. Best wishes,Tenbi Talulah.

Tenbi,
Thanks so much for backing my story and leaving such a wonderful comment! It is much appreciated!
Regards,
Shelly view book

A great read. There's nothing like a great thriller, and this story qualifies. Thanks for the invite to review and back, which I've done.

Shelly
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What a great story! I just LOVE time travel stories! The fantasy of that alternate universe, and the opportunity to look at life from a different standpoint, is such a draw for me.

I love how your story starts out in the prologue with your character disappearing into the white light. The only suggestion I would make is to expand that scene a little with more description. It seemed slightly "brief", leaving me wanting more of a build up before she makes the jump.

Anyway, I like the story. Good luck with it!

Shelly
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Paul,

I have read your story and although I found the content to be outside my mainstream pick, I really liked it. You have a unique story and style. And the characters names are just as unique! The text is very detailed however, and I found myself having to pay close attention to what I was reading in order not to get lost. But I have definitely backed your book. Thanks for inviting me to look at it.

Shelly
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Tarrant,

What a great pitch. It made me want to read the story, that is for sure! And I am glad I did. Although it is not a storyline I typically gravitate towards, the financial side of it, I really did enjoy the story, even if it is a touchy subject for everyone right now. Money, that is.

I think your writing style is straight forward and the story moves along nicely. I have backed it with confidence that it will go all the way.

Shelly
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Just the kind of book for a dull afternoon.

Thank you so much for looking at and backing The Scandalous Tutor Sherry! I can't wait to read your story as well. I love fiction and fantasy stories. I also agree with you on true-life stories. They can be so hard to read.

And kudos to you for being a special education teacher! Our youngest has CP after being born 3.5 months early and has a group of special ed. teachers we just love to death! He would not be thriving without special people like you!

Thanks again for your support and I hope to be reading your story very soon! Please send me a message when you've posted it!

Regards,
Shelly Palmer view book

Dear Shelly, I got so excited at the romance when I read your pitch & could hardly wait to read your book. :) I love love-stories & was expecting the tudor to end up marrying Viv, but when I read his thoughts of "not deflower her," in chapter 5, I wondered & am not sure how your story will turn out? :) I love happy endings. :) It is a good read with nice crisp paragraphs & dialogue. :) We've backed each other's books & I've ****** 'd yours :) - could ****** mine? :) Thank you. :) Love, Susie :)

Thanks so much for you support Suzie! I know what you mean about the happy ending and I won't give away the ending completely, but I don't want you to stress...there is indeed a happy ending! What is a romance without one?! I have backed your book also and you are on my bookshelf! You are the best, thanks Suzie!
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Danielle,
What a fanciful story! You have a vivid imagination that is reflected in your writing. The storyline is sound, as are the characters, and it reads with an easy flow. There are some spelling and punctuation errors that need some attention, but that is just fine tuning that all of us need really. It is hard to notice small things like that when one is so close to their own story. Something I am guilty of myself, I'm afraid. But I really like your story, and although I have only had time to read through the first 5 chapters, I plan to leave it on my watchlist until I have completed reading it for a very simple reason...I like it! And because of that, I have backed it.

Good luck to you!
Shelly
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What a powerful prologue! I love a great Scottish Highland story, and this book falls into that category. I have only had time to read the first two chapters, but have already backed your book. Your writing style is fluid and makes for an easy read, which I very much appreciate as I don't like to "work" at reading. Your writing is also very descriptive, so much so that I feel like I am right in the middle of the scene myself, which is a great credit to your talent.

I will continue to read it until I have completed it, but have already backed it since I know this book will go all the way!

All the best,
Shelly
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This is an enthralling story right from the very first paragraph. The characters are substantial and pervasive, and you make them feel real with their strong thoughts and voices. Your vivid description of the various scenes also paint a befitting backdrop as each new chapter unfolds, and supports the characters as they travel through the storyline. The plot is well thought out and has a good sense of flow and meanders along like a fresh spring stream with a known destination that makes you want to walk along the bank to follow.

This book is right up my alley. I very much enjoyed the read and have willingly backed it.

Good luck!

Shelly
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I've sampled a couple of random chapters, and really like what I've read so far, but hope to read more asap. You clearly have the gift for storytelling, and I think this book has great potential to go all the way! I wish you the best of luck with it.

Regards,
Shelly
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Ida,

I started reading your book an hour ago and I was immediately sucked in by the vortex of a gripping story! It is well written and is both compelling and poignant. I myself, have had the displeasure of having illnesses that landed me in many a doctors office or hospital only to have them tell me they can't find anything wrong or don't know what is causing my symptoms. So I could very much relate to Kyle's plight. I'll be anxious to read the rest of the story, and it looks like that won't be long since your story is parked on the edge of the editor's desk it seems! Bravo!

All the best,
Shelly
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A DUKE FROM THE PAST
Shelly Palmer

I have read through Chapter 9 and when I tried to bring up Chapter 10 and 11, I got an error message that says "an error occured while loading the chapter text." I would love to continue reading. Perhaps you can take a look at the problem and see if you can correct the error.

This is so well crafted, I am enjoying it very much. The concept of traveling back in time has always appealed to me as the idea has endured for many years and many writers have explored it. I have made use of it in my own writing. I suppose this is a hunger for other times that are not so complex and frustrating as today.

I do like your characters and the conflicts between them are interesting, I am eager to see how this plays out.

Glad I backed your novel.

Mary Enck
A King in Time

******Mary,******

I got right onto those chapters without problem? I've notice that when I click more than once on a chapter on other people's books, that I get the same message you did. Sometimes I have to go back to the previous chapter, then try going forward again with only one click, and depending on the server traffic, it can take awhile to load. If you have continued problems, we can try to contact the authonomy website administrators for help.

I really do appreciate you taking the time to read my story and the feedback you've offered so far and I can't thank you enough!

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Great idea and characters for this one.
The plot is entertaining, with a feisty heroine and skeptical hero.
Watch out for the use of the words ‘had’ and ‘that’. Search your text and eliminate them wherever possible. Brits won’t get the Ozzie and Harriet reference. If you are selling to an international market you may want to come up with another reference.
Enjoyed it so far. You are doing well with the romance genre. The couple is about to meet and I will read on and give you more feedback if you like.
Christine Elaine Black
MAXIMUS

Christine,
Thanks so much for the great feedback so far. If you have any suggestions for the replacement for the Ozzie and Harriet reference, let me know! Since I'm on the other side of the pond, I wouldn't have much clue as to what I could use that they would understand! I do watch Top Gear on BBC regularly though...great show! I will be anxious to get more suggestions from you when you are done, as I certainly could use the feedback and help. Thanks again,
Shelly view book