This is good stuff. I found it a little confusing having her boss called Jack and her husband called John, the names are too similar. I like the dialogue it is realistic and I can see this being published. The plot is good with intriguing questions like who was sleeping with her husband being posed to keep the reader interested. A really good read. view book

This is really moving. I found myself getting annoyed with the hospital and doctors for not diagnosing you quicker and moved to tears by the reactions of your friends. I really hope you get this out there somehow - self published perhaps if not picked up by a publisher. I've given you lots of stars and hope to find room on the shelf when possible.

I suppose the only problem I can see with getting it published would be the length as it would probably be too short, but I'm sure it can be padded out to the required size by yourself working with an editor or a co-writer.

Best of luck to you. xxxx view book

This is beautiful writing Casimir. view book

This is a cool book it feels believable and real and its very well written. I like the dialogue, the accents. I'm going to give it lots of stars, even though I dont like footy. I like the pitch and the plot too. I havent got any negatives for it. view book

How do I add you as a friend on facebook? I havent got enough people on there who are completely happy and salmonesque. I hope you make lots of money from this book and your other ones because you are worth it (in the words of loreal). And the world is full of annoying people making more money than I do and I'd quite like it if someone talented and funny managed to beat them at it. Its not going to be me so it might as well be you. Good luck to you and thank you for writing funny books. view book

This is a good premise and I agree with other comments about it being a good plot for a film. I'm slightly concerned about him stealing charity money as even though he is dying it doesnt excuse him stealing money from charity. But I havent read it all so i dont know if / how you get around that one.

I noticed a couple of minor typo's, such as using 'routes' instead of 'roots'; and I wondered how much depth / detail you give to his condition. For example, you have him eating a burger and I'm wondering if someone with stomach cancer could eat a burger or not. I appreciate its not a book about cancer its a book about what you'd do if you only had three months to live, but I think you have to make sure the condition is believable, because cynical old farts like me will read it.

I've given you a high rating and wish you well with this entertaining story.

Deb
Charisma view book

This is not easy to read. You have a very distinctive style and voice and I feel as though I would need to read a lot to get into it. It's difficult to rate, I will read more and rate it. view book

I read Vimto and enjoyed it. You have an unusual voice and style of writing. Highly rated.

Have you thought about writing a full length novel? I'd be interested in seeing how you got on with a full-length story too. view book

Thoroughly enjoyable and entertaining. view book

This is fun, clever and funny, the sort of book I want to read. I hope in a universe somewhere it is a bestseller, and I'm sure it probably is. There are some really good one-liners and its just fun to read. view book

I know who Elvis is, but I'm not saying anything. The survival of humantity depends on it. Really good and funny too. view book