Love the premise, the writing is engaging. I like the set up, with Wolf going to a celebrity rehab center for the publicity, and obviously there's going to be a collision between Wolf, Darcy, and Luna, it seems. Well, I've only read the first chapter, so I suppose anything could happen still. Dialog... view book

Interesting. A 700-word synopsis of your book, and a 42-word critique. And full of typos. Do you think the delay in getting the edited version to them caused them to just run out of time? view book

Emma, thanks for the read offer. To be honest, after reading so much here from Oct-Dec, I sort of burnt out on it, plus trying to spend more time writing. But I thought I'd take a peek and see if it interested me. Please don't be offended or think me harsh, this is all meant as constructive. I love ... view book

I knew I had read this before, but you're right when you said it's a completely different story. I didn't recognize any of it. So after reading the opening 3 chapters, I went back to my previous comments and then I remembered the previous version. I think this one starts much stronger. The story and... view book

Paul, I promised I'd get to this before the end of the month. I still have an hour to spare. ha. First off, the story line has great potential. I've read the first 6 chapters (especially since they're so short). The initial opening, while the narrator speaking directly to me the reader was jarri... view book