One more thing. Allow me to be padentic, Huhehaote should be Huhot. And ‘Ami Tofuo’ should be Ami Tuofo – which was Chinese for Buddha Amitabha. view book

I've just finished reading Chapter 1. I agree with Raven Jake, that a logical gap/consistency is missing somewhere. Time indication would also be helpful. For example, what happen to you on the second day? How long have you been crying before Third Monkey brought the goat? view book

Congratulations. You've done it. There may be a long way before it could be published, you'll have my support, and comments. Comment no. 1. The literal translation of "Po Xie" in Chinese into "the Broken Shoe" has a strong impact. We all know the actual translation should be the Worn-out Shoe, mea... view book