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Permac

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Our novel has been 15 years in the making. A story that seemed to write itself, has been through several edits and rewrites until it shines.

I haven't been to this site in many months, but will check back weekly. I'm busy working on films and coming up with strategies to promote this book. My eye sight is not too good anymore so it's difficult to read online. But if you read and comment on our book, I will return the favour. If you back our book, I will o what I can to help you advance.

I just grew tired of trying to get people to read what I've posted. I'm not fond of spam and I don't imagine others are either.

I wish you the best of luck with your book.

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The Eyes of Tokorel: The Color....

Drew Bankston and Deb Alverson....

Two enemies. 2 sets of skills. One goal: find the truth about their histories. Their planets' futures hang in the balance.


Permac Sude and Linsora Anselm come from the same race but different planets plagued with historical inaccuracies that cause them to be wary of each others’ intensions.

Permac’s people, the Tokorellans, developed the ability to read and influence the emotions of others, while Linsora’s people, the Khizarans, never learned the secret. Permac constantly has to watch his back as Linsora’s knife wielding society has raised her to believe that the only good enemy is a dead one. However, circumstances force them to work together to discover what truly happened in the past, while outside forces attempt to stop their efforts.

Clues throughout the galaxy lead them to realize that their respective governments have deceived their people for years. But to what end? A war could cause total annihilation of both worlds. As they attempt to trust each other, love eventually enters their lives. But when death enters the equation will the mystery be solved or will other forces win out?

 

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I wrote 172 days ago

Hey Scott: I really like your writing style and the way the story locks you into wanting to know more. Great opening scene with the hunt. Lot's of description which I enjoy. I would suggest going through and doing a little more editing. Check for tenses and grammar. I'll probably come back and re... view book

I wrote 347 days ago

I love how you've been able to tell the story from many different angles. Your descriptions are vivid which appeals to me greatly being a video producer. I can see this being a movie someday. Very nicely done. Highly starred. Drew The Eyes of Tokorel view book

I wrote 369 days ago

As a video producer I look for books where I can see the action and this one certainly fills the bill. I have no trouble visualizing each sentence. Very well done! Best of luck in this endeavor! Highly starred! Drew The Eyes of Tokorel view book

I wrote 369 days ago

Very interesting reading with an almost hypnotic way to the writing. One begins to read and drifts away caught up in the words. The end comes too quickly. Thank you for inviting me to read. I'm hopeful for your future publishing success. Drew The Eyes of Tokorel view book

I wrote 371 days ago

I absolutely loved this! Your dialogue is wonderful and draws me in. From the every beginning talking about the feather floating down, to the descriptions of thought and actions, to the interaction of characters. I only had tim to read a few short chapters, but I will be back to read more. Very high... view book

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