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Thanks to everyone who helped me get to the Desk and who supported my work.

I'm a retired Canadian lawyer living part-time in Mexico. I have a publisher for EPIPHANIES, my book on the craft of writing fiction, and two offers from smaller publishers to publish IN ALL THE WRONG PLACES. BTW, I've changed the title to SWOOP and have done a major revision.

I'm querying with an updated query letter, and getting some requests for partials. I still lean toward having an agent guide my career, and the marketing and distribution support of a mainstream publisher. However, the publishing environment is changing so rapidly that a smaller publisher may well be able to compete very favourably with a larger publisher when it comes to promoting the novel, and my part in promotion may become easier, too.

When I'm not writing, I dance the salsa, study other writers, edit manuscripts, bake, play with my dogs, and value my friendships. And, I'm starting a business related to the book business. I've had lots of crazy business ideas over the years, but this is the first one that excites me because it has an altruistic objective, and the opportunity to make some money. The other ideas didn't have both.

Excellent writing is a journey without a final destination. The magic of that journey keeps us writing.

Again, thanks to everyone. I can be contacted at sjdunncuba@yahoo.com if you'd like to keep in touch.

favourite books

The Shipping News (E. Annie Proulx), Fall On Your Knees (Anne-Marie Macdonald), almost anything by John LeCarre, The Handmaid's Tale (Margaret Atwood), Different Seasons (Stephen King), The Kite Runner (Khaled Hosseini), A Fine Balance (Rohanton Mistry), Beloved (Toni Morrison), As I Lay Dying (William Faulkner), The Bone People (Keri Hulme), The Poisonwood Bible (Barbara Kingsolver), The Reader (Bernhard Schlink), Larry's Party (Carol Shields), The Pilot's Wife (Anita Shreve), Behind the Scenes at the Museum (Kate Atkinson), anything by William Shakespeare, The God Delusion (Richard Dawkins), and lots more (hard to pick a favourite).

Plus, of course, books on the writing craft, including Self-Editing for Fiction Writers by Renni Browne and Dave King, Scene and Structure by Jack W. Bickham, a host of others, plus coming soon EPIPHANIES (shameless self-promotion.)

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SWOOP (formerly In All The Wro....

Sheryl J. Dunn

One million pedophiles. Three angry women. One outrageous solution.


Meet AMBER GRAYSON - - runway model looks, a career as a stockbroker, and married to David, a prominent lawyer. But a secred childhood shame taints every breath, and her uncontrollable anger is threatening her marriage . . .

Meet veterinarian DR. ROBIN PIPER, grieving widow and recovering Roman Catholic. She feels guilty every time she puts an animal out of its misery - - and guiltier still that she lacked the courage to kill the pedophile who murdered her niece . . .

Meet sexy CASSIE DUBAIS, a successful car dealer - - she's been revved up and rarin' to take the turnpike to murder ever since two men gang raped her when she was ten, and the bastards got off, scot free . . .

Over dinner, wine and laughter, they devise ten rules for committing the perfect murder . . . and nothing stays the same.

"SWOOP is wonderfully satiric - - an overdue addition to the thriller genre. It sweeps you to the finish, and haunts you long after." (Michael Grais, screenwriter, director, and producer.)

 

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I wrote 987 days ago

Francesco, sincere congratulations on your review. On the forums you asked where to go from here, and if the HC editor is correct, then you have to look at your overall structure. I suggest doing a storyboard or chapter and scene outline. There's free software to help you-- yWriter--or you can do... view book

I wrote 1178 days ago

Lickety Split... I have no nits, not a one. Rare occurrence for me. I really like this. Without reading the whole novel, I can't make any judgments about your overall structure, and hesitate to make structural comments on only part of a novel, but if the structure is sound, you've got a winner... view book

I wrote 1182 days ago

No Love Lost... I like your writing voice very much, and the story promises to be a good one--a thriller with meat. Two nits, however: 1. don't use italics for emphasis: if the emphasis simply must be on a certain word, then rewrite until it falls naturally onto that word; otherwise, let the ... view book

I wrote 1186 days ago

Nine to the Evolution... After reading your pitches, I thought I was going to see an essay rather than a novel, but that's not the case. So, Varun, you've got to do something with your pitches. Here's the allegedly winning formula for the longer pitch: 1. Who is your Main Character? (if yo... view book

I wrote 1191 days ago

Cross Talk... Terrence, you're doing a lot of things right in this work. Unfortunately, I only had time to read one chapter, plus I looked at a couple of the comments made by others, and I agree with all of the suggestions I read. Here are a couple of books which will help with some of the sug... view book

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