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Lorri

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My shelf is currently locked until further notice.

Follow the blog: http://euphorianovel.blogspot.ca/ and then message me for a read.

Soultakers is here for feedback. The last two chapters are the same as the first two. This is a novel I lost en-route to Canada eight years ago... I guess I'm re-writing.

Oh yeah, and it's not vampire.

And, if you want to read Soultakers, read it, rather than ask for a swap. If you read it, and especially if you comment, you may be surprised that I return the favour.

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not really there wrote 201 days ago

Yo! Send me an email. We must catch up :o)

Lorri wrote 350 days ago

READ MY BIO - BEFORE asking me to read, back, or do anything else re....

Project Z wrote 400 days ago

Thank you, Lorri. :)

DerekTobin wrote 408 days ago

Sounds fair Lorri - deal. Derek

Lallie wrote 437 days ago

Hiya, I'm probably being a muppet but I can't find you on there. I'm ....

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I wrote 408 days ago

Both pitches are great, short and long. Pull me in as a reader easily. I like this line.. ‘like jagged shadows piercing an already forgotten dream’. The first chapter sets a nice feel and brings the reader into this new world. I’m liking it as I go into chapter two. Chapter two has a pov ... view book

I wrote 612 days ago

I was going to back this for the title alone, and then I read the pitch! Looking forward to taking a closer look. Lorri view book

I wrote 788 days ago

I came back again as I said I would. I find the conversation rather stilted, and there area far too many, xperson stated, (way to many 'stated's') said lovingly, responded innoccently etc. Far too many. You need to show the reader these emotions, not tell them. You can get a way with an odd one... view book

I wrote 789 days ago

I was going to comment on this, but I see Al has already covered a lot of the points that bothered me as a reader. I found I couldn't really read the story because of how jarring the tense changes were. I also felt there was way too much dialogue for a first chapter. I do hope you can iron ou... view book

I wrote 832 days ago

Why the heck hasn't this made the desk yet? I'm sure I've backed you before, but I'm putting you back on my shelf. Lorrii view book

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