returned for a second helping: Some great lines in this '...on a mission to get pruned up' 'more irritating than sand in your pants' I've never had cause to spell todgers <-- but this is how I imagined it (in UK anyway though this could prove to be a learning curve) Complexion and constipation -... view book

over-baked (hyphenate?) the lazy cow reflection is a good slant m- haha globule good play - why not milk it a little - 'glob glob globule' or such like? lose sorry? - unless it is there for a good reason(?) yes badgers set wouldn't perhaps describe a hair-do somore true to your character - good ... view book

Very good! Must say I thought a natural ending to chap one would have been after the romantic allusion: '...wandering to a town under different stars' and 'Even if just a little.' - as it seems to wind-up rather neatly there. And as time does not permit I must leave this there and WL... view book

Why have I been to this so many times and not commented? Maybe I agree with Paul Western below... maybe it's because back in 1970 a similar smackhead once handed me a copy of 'Steppenwolf'. Waving aside a puff of dope-smoke he said: 'You gotta read this, man.' - 'Woodstock's gonna change the world,... view book

Ha ah... the old Welsh Triangle - was hooked from the plastic dome - must stop reading though, got to go W-listed though - hey not sure about the weeping angel simile though - thought it slowed the action a bit - but good stuff esp where the coal miners arm shatters through the pod... cheers view book