Hi This was a great piece I feel that you have created a colurful and engaging world that I found myself become involved in I loved all the elements and your writing style is good and allows the story to progress , a really lovely piece that all children would love - starred and on my shelf ! ... view book

Hi Clive I really enjoyed this and your writing style has a great tone and pace - I felt you captured the follibles of families and everyday life and i liked the interaction you built between all the family very effective and funny. A really good piece- starred and on my shelf ! Good luck Ste... view book

Hi Lenny Thanks for your message I really appreciate it and I really enjoyed reading your work it was so realistic and relatable it made me sad and happy in equal measure just such a inspirational and motivating piece highly starred and on my shelf Steph view book

Hi David Thanks for your message - this is a thought provoking piece and although I am not an americian the issues you raise seem familar in terms of the goverment in my country and I applaud you for bringing them to light The best of luck with this book Steph view book

Hi James What a great start - I've read the first chapter and it was fanstastic , the pacing , the description , how the events unfolded and the implications for future chapters-I was really drawn in and I could easily read more On my watchlist and highly starred Steph view book