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Euneria by Charles Larch Hi LC, here’s my Alliance of Worldbuilders crit. Normal disclaimers that it’s just my opinion and therefore probably worth ignoring, apply. Just chose any bits you like, and disregard the rest. Euneria is a collection of short fantasy stories for children, d... view book

The Gnome Warriors of Seraphina M P Fry Hi Martin, here’s my Alliance of Worldbuilders crit for your book. The usual disclaimers, it’s just my opinion, disregard whatever you don’t like or don’t agree with etc etc. The short pitch : feels a bit bland to me, could do with carrying some... view book

The Wizard’s Daughter Steve Pemberton Hi Steve, here is my Alliance of Worldbuilders crit. The usual disclaimers apply, it’s just my deranged ramblings so ignore anything you don’t like. Not that there is likely to be much here. I liked the short pitch. I did think that the... view book

Hi Andi, my comments as promised. Chick lit isn't really my thing ( although I have an open invitation to write one!) but humour is actually universal. No matter what your genre, a joke is a joke. I liked your pace and delivery. if you've kept that pace through the whole novel, there is no rea... view book