CHIRG What a great book! I think how you have structured this is brilliant, perfect for its target audience. The way you capture your characters (especially Finger Bones) is very good. Great dialogue and an equally great storyline developing. Strong sensory predicates enhance the narrative. - Im... view book

Many thanks some of these have come about from changes in the re-write and I totally missed -So once again thanks - Ian view book

CHIRG What a brilliant story, great characters. For me, and this is my preference, you set the scene with a visual narrative, however it would be more atmospheric if you would have added descriptive sound and other descriptive senses in the opening. Minor, but to me it sets the scene better. S... view book

CRIG This is GREAT! I'm not for 1st person normally, however you capture Cassidy 's character so well in both dialogue and inner thought. The style is smooth and engaging. I can't find fault in this, the story absorbs you - Brilliant. Rated and shelved - Impressive view book

I remember this from a previous read, such is the effect it had. This is one of those deep, highly structured stories who's meaning sometimes gets lost in the controversial subject matter. Truth and convention are not always the best of friends and this explores them brilliantly. This is a very rich... view book