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Hey everyone, I would love for you guys to read my book, the beauty of disaster... and to leave comments, and if you do, send me a message right after of which story you want to be reviewed. If you don't send me a message I'm going to assume you just read my story to read it. Sorry, but I am busy usually. I will review your work as soon as I can. I'm sorry if in the past you expected me to and I never got back to you; I actually dropped off writing for a while and am just now back. Also, do not send me messages of which the content is and I quote one previous message “My work” I'm not going to sell them out completely “is up, go and review it”… Excuse me? Do I know you? No. Have we ever talked? No. Have you ever reviewed my work or etc? No… So what makes you think you have the right to tell me to review your work? You come off as bossy, and you are sending a random person a message telling them to review your work. No thank you, no please, no I’ll swap. No anything. That is beyond rude. Do not ever send me a message like this. I would have reviewed it, but the way you said it… no thank you. Good luck trying to get reviews when you are sending messages like these. If you want me to review your work, at least be nice about it… Do not be rude. But other than that, if you ask me, nicely, anything about your book, I usually will do it and as quick as I can too.
Thanks,
Mylo
P.S.
If Ive backed your book but havent left comments that means Ive read some but havent left a comment... so take that a good thing.

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The beauty of disaster

Mylo

Zoey's life turns upside down when she gets a grant to a prestigous school. Everything from being dumped to living with Chris, her complete opposite.


Zoey's life was supposed to have gotten better since she recieved news that she was accepted by the Meyer grant to the prestigous university. However her life completely gets turned upside down, she is dumped, and hes been dating her best friend behind her back. As though that wasnt bad enough, shes forced to live with her complete opposite, Chris. They hate each other instantly, and all she wants to do is focus on school and avoid obnoxious Chris. However all he wants to do is make her life a living hell, while teaching her a lesson. When she discovers her plan, everything changes, and she wants to retaliate, causing a battle within the house. This grant is a disaster, and gives new meaning to battle of the sexes. But, how long can tempers flare without feelings getting attached?

 

Candlelight

Mylo

Everyone has secrets.... Some more deadly than others.


Fae was beaten and left for dead. She has no recollection of her old life. She is instantly brought in by a family and immediately noticed by the most popular and wanted boy at school, Cael. The closer she gets to Cael, the closer she is to the ugly truth of her old life and who she was. When things get complicated, only Cael and Fae can save the world crumbling around them. This is no ordinary love story, even when you think you know it all, or have figured it out, you're wrong.

 

Tomona Teg.. plus seven

Megan

Tomona Teg, worked with only one other person... that was until they had betrayed her. Now shes forced to work with 7 unque prodigy children!


Tomona Teg, the best thief who was thought to never gotten busted, recently was caught. She was born into the French Snakes, a group of the worlds best thieves and masterminds. On her last mission for the French Snakes, her ex set her up and he got away with the money as she got caught.
Now forced to work for the Government, they must perform a test on her or she gets sent to Prison for all of her life. The thing is, she might not survive. So its death or death.
Well, she survived and the funny thing is she is pretty much immortal. Whats worse is she has to work with seven other people just like her.
Find out what happens when they go on their first mission for the government.

 

Ace and Thorn for Never

Megan Otto

Ace is an Ace in the hole when it comes to girls... But when it comes to love hes way off


Ace is a free spirited boy who has the girls at his school in the palm of his hand. Hes hooked up with at least half of the schools girls. The girls of which he hasnt been with... they're next in line. He never dates because its against his rules of which he has many of. He has only had one constant girl... Thorn Kimberly. Theyve been best friends since before birth and their parents were best friends before thier children's births. But when things begin to go wrong at home and when Thorn begins to fall for a new boyfriend she has, he finds the girl he should of have all along was right by his side. The rules: 1 - never date ~ its all about the fun 2 - never be with the same girl twice 3 - never get with a girl and then her sister ~ unless the girl doesnt find out 4 - never get with a girl who's got a brother whos a big guy and doesn't like you ~ saves you a face ache 5 - never fall in love or in love with your best friend ~ AWW CRAP... too late

 

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I wrote 398 days ago

There are some sentences that could have continued with the following sentences, where you could have replaced the period with a comma. There are a few short/choppy sentences, but nothing horrible. You leave no room for confusion. For example, when there is a name of someone or a word most people do... view book

I wrote 398 days ago

So far, I have read to chapter 3, and it is good. At first I had to get used to your style of writing, but not in a bad way. It made the story much more interesting. Its very descriptive, especially when he describes eating the orange, I can picture it. So far, your work is fantastic, you have a tal... view book

I wrote 398 days ago

I like the summary, it left me intrigued, definitely makes me want to read it. Mylo view book

I wrote 1227 days ago

The first chapter is a brilliant piece of work. One of the best stories/chapters I have read on authonomy. I hope you become a published author. Your sence of detail adds to a sence of imagery Im jealous of. Congrats, will read more when I have more time. Mylo view book

I wrote 1227 days ago

both of your pitches are absolutely amazing. consider yourslef backed. view book

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