Okie so Christine,

I know I said I was going to read this a chapter a day but I couldn't help but continue reading! I'm loving how easily this story is unfolding and I'm compelled deep in the events with Erica. I've been reading for most of the day and still need to read on.

Chapter 6 and onwards now :)

Love it!

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Neville,

I love how your story begins. Within in the first few sentences I was submerged in a creative story which had the familar feeling of an old fashioned fairytale. That's a very enjoyable genre and I find your descriptions quite fun to read. The scenes just came together in my mind and that grips me further into your story.

I'm reading chapter by chapter, so I hope to get to the next chapter as soon as.

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Kirk,

For my first time read I'm utterly compelled by your story. I got in so deep that I felt at one point that I was watching a movie. As soon as Daniel got involved with Herr Wolff I was automatically sceaming in my head, 'Nooo, don't do it. He's trouble!' You're characters are realistic and I find myself attached to Daniel in way and I'm not to sure why, he's a very likeable character, although obviously smart, he seems incredibly gullible; I like that a lot. Be sure I've been hooked and will continue to read the rest of the chapters.

I'm happy that I've backed this book. I'm going to enjoy this read!

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Scott,

The first thing I get from your writing is that you put a lot of thought into how you want the reader to see what you're so clearly seeing in your head whilst writing. The scene is set almost immediately, Maanta obviously the outcast which is good character building as I'm sure we'll see him evolving dramtically throughout the story. You're very descriptive and detailed which draws the reader in and makes them want to read further.

I'm reading chapter by chapter at the moment and look foward to reading the next.

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Dianna,

It's clear to see just from the first few sentences that this is a subject in which you are passionate about and that comes through strongly through the character. It's nice to see the Third Person writing style, I always find that a difficult way of writing but I could read this with ease, which is very nice. Although this isn't exactly my preferred subject to read about, it is a very interesting read and can easily entice a reader.

I hope to read further chapters soon.

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Christine,

I can't tell you how deep I am in your story just from the first chapter! I love your writing style, it's so easy to read and realistic, I can easily relate to the main character, seeing everything threw her eyes, without even having to try. This is definitely the type of book I choose to read and I can't wait to read the next chapters! As I'm new I can see I have a lot of catching up to do but I can say I'll be happy to do so.

I'm going to aim to read a chapter a day just so I don't overwhelm myself as I want to read this seriously. I love the way you describe and I find myself relating to quirks that your main character has, very often, which is very comforting.

I'm adding this to my shelve :)

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Cara,

This book is taking center stage on my shelve so I can be sure to make this a regular read. I love how your first chapter starts deep in an unknown conflict. It's a very mysterious beginning and wills me to read further. I'm going to read this chapter by chapter just so I get a clear view and also, I don't want to over endulge myself :)

Can't wait to read on, I love your writing style, it's very inviting and I know I'm going to enjoy discovering how your plot develops :)

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