dean e brown recent comments

written 1400 days ago
cherry

Very well done. The journey is the story within the story within a story. Magic and action. Great read. view book

written 1403 days ago
cherry

Chapter 3 did not come up for me. The business applications are clear. After 6 chapters, I, as a Manager can see were I need to go spend some time. So I think you should publish this work and let me buy a copy.

Lots of value in the Business section. view book

written 1403 days ago
cherry

I enjoy how early on the characters don't have much of an accent in their voice. But later, the voice comes from the hills and small towns. Very good setting for a murder. This would make a good TV show.

Thank you for sharing. view book

written 1404 days ago
cherry

Love the core message. Doing a little can mean a lot.

As for the writing itself. Each paragraph should have a single thought or focus. Some of yours are more than a page long, and have several perspectives and messages. Sometimes less is more. view book

written 1404 days ago
cherry

I'm old enough to understand how to laugh at myself. Your way of doing the twisted thinking cha-cha is great. Love the chapters you have put up here.

Thanks for sharing. view book

written 1404 days ago
cherry

I read all 7 chapters you presented. A good book. One that can catch the heart of anyone who has suffered or watched the suffering of others. And as far as I can tell, that is a pretty common malady in todays world. Thank you for sharing the insights into the Doctors plight when trying ot do things right. view book

written 1405 days ago
cherry

I had never considered reading the story from Goliath's point of view. But I have to admit, that my mind puts this constantly in David's time, not my granddaughters. Still I enjoyed the first 6 chapters. view book

written 1405 days ago
cherry

The paragraphs are shot, but the humor is not. The story line move well. I takes a few short chapters to get to the threat. That is when the action holds you a lot better.

Backed. view book

written 1410 days ago
cherry

The appeal will be pretty broad. The story moves quickly. The voice is clear in your head. Nice message. view book

written 1411 days ago
cherry

The street language would put off some readers, and draw others in. So depending on the matketing, this could be a real seller. At least what you have shown of it here. view book

written 1411 days ago
cherry

I am so glad I had my ear trained by some of my employees from the UK. Enjoyed the dialogues and mindsets. You should load the rest Hand In The Till. view book

written 1411 days ago
cherry

Your book is a good work. (Double meanings are intended.) Just to remind you, Moses could have been in training for God's calling to guide the sheep of the tribes. 40 years to learn the ways around Pharaoh's kingdom, and 40 years learning the ways of the land and herding (people). Still there is a good message here. view book

written 1411 days ago
cherry

In the first part of chapter one, I thought that maybe you had written a parody on authonomy. But they in very short order, it was clear that this was a wonderful work.
Liked the perodic poetic license you take,
It all mixes togeather a great book to bake. view book

written 1412 days ago
cherry

Good story. Different, but good. I can't find anything to correct. Good work. Backed. view book

written 1413 days ago
cherry

Great start. Hope you share more. Let me know when you do. view book

written 1413 days ago
cherry

I love that the con man has no clue. Great read for the first three chapters. view book

written 1417 days ago
cherry

I have been aginst the evolution brain wash for about 30 years. So I had to read your work. I agree with the subject matter. I know that you describe the work as a laymans work. Yet you come accross as sermon notes at times. Lots of data and definitions. In the end you conclude that either evolution or creationism is a matter of faith because there is no solid evidence.

Should have a good market in the Christian genre.

Backed. view book

written 1419 days ago
cherry

I hope you upload the rest. Good reading. view book

written 1419 days ago
cherry

Love the book. Great pitch. The book even holds true as I read the first 4 chapters. A must read for people interested in magic and teens. view book

written 1420 days ago
cherry

Three wolds, yet one age old problem, good and evil. A young child to travel between, and solve his own challenge from his own world and life.

Like it.

Watch how you used the word "off" instead of "of" in one place. view book

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