Hey Katie, I love your book. If I could give you a few suggestions, your writing sounds more like a novel than a diary entry. I say that because you say, "I just heard a knock downstairs" in chapter five. I think you should say something along the lines of, "Just when I thought the tv show couldn't ... view book

Okay, I commented on your other book, Leiutenant Ky...is that Lt. K.Y. as is the letters KY or is it Lt. Kentucky? If so, then you need to change it to Kentucky. Once again, you show such promise, just need to tighten up the words and formatting a bit. view book

You have a fantastic book. I loved Sam, she reminds me, of well, me. Just not the kick-boxer part. This is a really good book. It will stay on bookshelf for a while. view book

I really enjoyed your book. It was funny, chaotic, addicting and well, quite awesome actually. Your MC has great voice. I live in the U.S. so a few of your words are not used here in America. So, whenever you go to get published, you will have to change quite a few words to meet American literature... view book

I appreciated what information you were trying to convey. I loved the original/edited examples you gave. The other examples you gave, were unclear to me how they changed. I think you should stick to original/edited...that worked out best for me. Good luck. view book