Alright Jonny, You backed Jerusalem, for no good reason that I can fathom but I appreciate that you did it. Your work is majestically insane. A kind of mad hybrid of Welsh and Gibson. The violence is ultra-realistic, the language fueled by some kind of toxin I haven't worked out, and if I did... view book

Hi Mr Milne, Not something I would read, but then I don't think I would be your target audience anyway. But in terms of craftmanship, you know what you are doing. Good crisp, entertaining prose that shifts the narrative smoothly. The idea seems well worked out and the characters and feel of th... view book

Hi Abby, Not really my kind of book but it seems well written and thought out. There's some clunky prose in there that an editor or an editing process would iron out ( for example '. . . by entering the gates of my was, our was.' You can't say something like that. It is grammatically obscure, a... view book

These are good, effective stories. The calm, detached nature of the prose accentuates the surreal and sometimes bitter edge. There's a kind of quiet urban madness underlying some of the stories that disturbs even though the prose remains controlled and precise. Very intelligent, provoking and... view book

Hi Ms Sammartino, This seems more like a confessional than a book. And that means it's very personal to you. But it has to be a book, which means it has to have some structure relative to what you are saying. At present it lacks this. I am sure there are a good couple of books in here, but you... view book