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I am UK based, and have had a few bits and pieces published and/or performed. I have recently uploaded my rewritten novel, SORTING IT OUT. I don't reply to spam, read fantasy, vampires, witches, dragons, magic, people who live in swamps, text consisting of foreigh language quotes, paranormal or religious fiction. I feel that any comment by me would be unfair to the author. However, if I see something interesting' I'll give it a read. Before you ask for comments please see my comments below. Spending hours writing honest feedback only to receive nastygrams from Mr & Mrs Angry hacks me off; as is the writer's intent.
Finally, if there is anyone out there who has uploaded any type of genre and hasn't had any reads/comments, I'll gladly take a look.


favourite books

The Hundred Year Old Man Who Climbed Through A Window and Disappeared by Jonas Jonasson.
Altogether by Somerset Maugham. A collection of thirty short stories.
Burnt Shadows by Kamila Shamshie.
Any Human Heart by William Boyd.
All That I Am by Anna Funder
Stasiland by Anna Funder
Alone in Berlin by Hans Fallada.
Ladysmith by Giles Foden.
Love is a Many Splendoured Thing by Han Suyin
The Post Office by Charles Bukowski
Smilla's Sense of Snow by Peter Hoeg.
A Farewell to Arms by Ernest Hemmingway.
The Book of Negroes by Lawrence Hill
The Sisters Brothers by Patrick DeWitt
Kate Atkinson-all
Mission to Paris + any by Alan Furst

Book Cover by the one and only: Bradley Wind

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Sorting it Out

Chris

A fifteen-year old Pakistani boy exploited by terrorists. A traumatised veteran exploited by successive British governments. What links them together?






Faz, out of school and isolated from his local Pakistani community, is targeted by fundamentalists who aim to radicalise him into committing a terrorist act. His life starts to fall apart. He is sent to a training camp in Pakistan. On his return, he, his mother and his girlfriend are threatened by those who think they control him.

Ray, an angry tramp-like figure, is suddenly given the opportunity to escape from his disastrous life-style. However, his anger and frustration create a barrier to the achievement of a new life. He soon realises that his country has used and discarded him. Things go rapidly downhill when he takes drastic steps intended to force the authorities to recognise his plight.

Both are social outcasts who lean on one another for support, but their situation is about to change as they reach the stage where each must sort his life out, whatever the consequences.

Total Word count: 79,500

 

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ChristineL wrote 2 days ago

Hi Chris, Thanks for your comments. They are valid. This novel def....

lcdelagb wrote 2 days ago

Sorry xD but if you check my comments you'll notice I haven't comment....

Jue Shaw wrote 2 days ago

Ha ha, I was reading your book and tried to turn to chapter five when....

ChristineL wrote 4 days ago

Nice. Where on the net? Is it something that anyone can watch? Chr....

ChristineL wrote 6 days ago

Have fun at the shooting. Is it a TV show? Christine

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I wrote 11 hours ago

The Blood Giant. R.J.Ursell. 19/05/13 Hi RJ, Ha ha. Just saw your post in BHCG. (I am a member on hold but drop by now and again). I know how you feel about non-return reads – I get about 2 returns out of ten reads, when lucky.). A good idea is to check when people were last online (one of ... view book

I wrote 2 days ago

Summer of Jade Dragon (cont.). Chapter 3. 1). 'Weather forecast.' (Maybe: The weather forecast or Weather forecasts are...). 2). Who is Jo speaking to when he says 'Hudson...?). 3). Who is speaking, 'Are they Albino...?'). 4). Lunch followed by dinner at the zoo. Boy, they have appetites. D... view book

I wrote 9 days ago

The Solitary Man by Max Bradford. 10/05/13 Hi Max, as someone who joined the RN at fifteen, I thought I would take a look. SP. The second sentence may be more meaningful as : Will Charlie.B. live long enough... LP. 1). 'Home Secretary has to...' (maybe: 'as' to...) 2). I'm not clever with... view book

I wrote 12 days ago

Summer of Jade Dragon. Chapter 2 (cont). Pushing Hands. 1). 'Slam my fist...' Trying to visualise whether this works. 2). The sentence 'That'll teach it...' Could all these be linked – For being loud, five thirty in the morning. Can't see what so...soon does for the sentence. 3). 'Soon enough ... view book

I wrote 16 days ago

The Summer of Jade Dragon (cont). I like the new SP. Simple and informative. The SP has an effect on the LP and, at present, I think it says all. Maybe-again- think about omitting 'ineffective. I tend to be a bit slow reading and making notes but here goes. Bear in mind our language difference... view book

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