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Sly80

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I'm back with another Stonefish adventure - Stonefish and the Salamander - and I'm hoping for some honest feedback which I promise to reciprocate.

I'm not interested in the ED, in backings or in throw-away compliments, only in making my novel as good as I can get it and helping other writers do the same.

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Stonefish and the Salamander

Sly

Two enemies join forces to rescue a mutual friend kidnapped in Afghanistan, but it seems the US military doesn't want them to succeed.


Australian assassin, Stonefish, and his squad of ex-military officers discover that their best client is missing. Billionaire, Saul Madison, a man not afraid of fixing the world's problems by surgical means, is held hostage in Afghanistan. While he is driven slowly insane awaiting execution by the Taliban, only Stonefish's deadliest enemy can help him mount a rescue. Strange allies turn out to have even stranger opponents, including the US military as well as the terrorists. Someone important clearly doesn't want Madison to survive, and the rescue attempt rapidly disintegrates into a suicide mission.

 

Stonefish

Sly

If someone intends to kill you, they'll probably succeed.


Notorious Australian assassin, Stonefish, and his squad of ex-military officers, take on the most difficult assignments, the hardest men, and they guarantee success in exchange for rich rewards.

Lobo, a lone hit man, is fixated on killing Stonefish to enhance his own reputation. Masquerading as an informer to Washington-based Inspector Patterson, Lobo draws on the vast resources of Interpol to hunt his prey.

Meanwhile, high up in the US Government, someone wants Stonefish to do their dirty work, and they won't take 'no' for an answer.

Betrayed, coerced and cornered, the assassins find themselves fighting for their own survival.

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Though an arc runs through the novel, each of the chapters posted here, after reading the first, can be read as virtually stand-alone. So, if you venture further than 1, here's a rough guide: 2 Australia - boats, surf and cruelty, 3 Africa - politics, business, and spot the clues, 4 the Baltic - gangsters and a grain of kindness, 5 America - art, wealth and envy, 6 Glasgow - some humour, 7 Alabama - explosive emotions.

Complete @ 87,000 words

 

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BeeJoy wrote 2 days ago

Hello. How are you? I would appreciate to switch comments and feedbac....

StaceyM wrote 5 days ago

Sly - thanks so much for your backing and helpful comments. I'm glad ....

StaceyM wrote 8 days ago

No probs Sly, I rated your writing when I first read it, and I had a....

James Workman wrote 21 days ago

Thank you for that.

Kenneth Edward Lim wrote 26 days ago

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I wrote 7 days ago

The short opening is punctuated by a stunning line: Four members of the class had a bloody good motive for killing Maddie. Then you follow this with a brilliant twist at the end of chapter 2 and also in the middle of chapter 3 where Maddie reveals her history, then yet another at the end of 4. You r... view book

I wrote 46 days ago

I've read this in a couple of its incarnations, and nothing you do can make it any less than beautiful. The fact that you cannot convince an agent of that defies belief. I like the drip feed here and have nothing but praise aside from a couple of small points. First, some of the stand-out lines:... view book

I wrote 59 days ago

I read the first three chapters and found them ideal for the age group. The writing is straight forward without being too simplistic or too challenging. The characters are easy to identify with, sharing the fears, teasing and dares of most children. Jack makes a good balance to the two girls, and th... view book

I wrote 63 days ago

Though beautifully written, this feels more like a nostalgic memoir in places than fiction for young adults: 'Many of my memories of the late seventies and eighties took place in that room.' It's more difficult, I suspect, for young adults to identify with recent history, i.e. that of their parents,... view book

I wrote 63 days ago

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